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I obviously suck at writing but I try

Cold, really cold. A freezing air rushed into my face, I stood there, confused. This ain't my home? I tried to walk around a bit, suddenly, I thought I saw something, or heard something, or felt something. I wasn't sure, but a force of curious pushed me to walk forward, pushed me faster. I ran through the forest with the thin, morning sunlight lighted up my face time to time, I felt the wind rushing through my body. As a spirit, I thought. Although that time, I didn't notice, how I'm already a spirit. I ran swiftly up to the rocky mountain covered with forests, suddenly, a strand of strong, bright sunlight shines right in my face. as soon as I realized, I found myself standing on the sky, looking down at thousands of clouds and birds flying through. What in the world brings me here. I walked slowly along the cliff, and as I look up, a giant, old tree, solemnly standing there, like an elder looking down at their children. "Hello." I'm not sure if it can understand my words, but I felt like home when I'm next to this enormous tree. As I walk closer, I found a red, liquid running down through the roots. Blood, I thought, why is the tree bleeding? I walked closer and looked, it was its tree pulp in a reddish color. where do they all come from? I looked closer and soon I found a small, broken red token, stuck in the center of a huge tree root. Let me get it out of there. As soon as I reached to the tiny token, the ground suddenly shook with anger, birds screaming as they flew, the old tree roots burnt in black within a blink of an eye. I pull my paw back as quickly as I can before everything goes too wrong. I thought I breathed heavily, although I can't. I looked at the old tree, covered in black, I suddenly felt bad. what have I done!? I put my eyes back to the broken little token, a feeling of anger, confusion, sadness ran through my body. I wanted to break it, but I can't, but how should I fix it? You are going to ruin everything. I won't leave you here. I stared at it. suddenly, the token gave a week glowing light, but I haven't noticed it, but it continues and goes stronger and brighter. Wind is rushing through my chest, the burnt tree bark starting to fall off, with healthy new ones beneath. Everything seems normal again. Except for the token, still stuck there, but it's not broken anymore. I looked at the tree, and around the tree, everything is lively, healthy, and the sun breaks through the clouds and shines through the huge tree, to the thin grass under it. It's amazing, I thought. Did I do that? all of that? I looked at myself in the little pond and said to myself.
I did that.
I whispered, as a spirit.
A happy one.

Base Score: 10 AP (Writing: 508 words)
+5 AP (Personal Work Bonus)
Total AP per submission: 15

Base Score: 5 GP (Writing: 508 words)
Total GP per submission: 5

Base Score: 10 AP (Shaded Illustration)
+5 AP (Full Body)
+20 AP (Full/Scenic Background)
+5 AP (Personal Work Bonus)
+25 AP (Event Bonus) (mountain biome event, story prompt, color pallet challenge)
Total AP per submission: 65

Base Score: 4 GP (Shaded Illustration)
+2 GP (Full Body)
+6 GP (Full/Scenic Background)
+12 GP (Event Bonus)
Total GP per submission: 24
(I hope I did the scoring right....)

total:80 AP & 31GP

Description
I obviously suck at writing but I try

Cold, really cold. A freezing air rushed into my face, I stood there, confused. This ain't my home? I tried to walk around a bit, suddenly, I thought I saw something, or heard something, or felt something. I wasn't sure, but a force of curious pushed me to walk forward, pushed me faster. I ran through the forest with the thin, morning sunlight lighted up my face time to time, I felt the wind rushing through my body. As a spirit, I thought. Although that time, I didn't notice, how I'm already a spirit. I ran swiftly up to the rocky mountain covered with forests, suddenly, a strand of strong, bright sunlight shines right in my face. as soon as I realized, I found myself standing on the sky, looking down at thousands of clouds and birds flying through. What in the world brings me here. I walked slowly along the cliff, and as I look up, a giant, old tree, solemnly standing there, like an elder looking down at their children. "Hello." I'm not sure if it can understand my words, but I felt like home when I'm next to this enormous tree. As I walk closer, I found a red, liquid running down through the roots. Blood, I thought, why is the tree bleeding? I walked closer and looked, it was its tree pulp in a reddish color. where do they all come from? I looked closer and soon I found a small, broken red token, stuck in the center of a huge tree root. Let me get it out of there. As soon as I reached to the tiny token, the ground suddenly shook with anger, birds screaming as they flew, the old tree roots burnt in black within a blink of an eye. I pull my paw back as quickly as I can before everything goes too wrong. I thought I breathed heavily, although I can't. I looked at the old tree, covered in black, I suddenly felt bad. what have I done!? I put my eyes back to the broken little token, a feeling of anger, confusion, sadness ran through my body. I wanted to break it, but I can't, but how should I fix it? You are going to ruin everything. I won't leave you here. I stared at it. suddenly, the token gave a week glowing light, but I haven't noticed it, but it continues and goes stronger and brighter. Wind is rushing through my chest, the burnt tree bark starting to fall off, with healthy new ones beneath. Everything seems normal again. Except for the token, still stuck there, but it's not broken anymore. I looked at the tree, and around the tree, everything is lively, healthy, and the sun breaks through the clouds and shines through the huge tree, to the thin grass under it. It's amazing, I thought. Did I do that? all of that? I looked at myself in the little pond and said to myself.
I did that.
I whispered, as a spirit.
A happy one.

Base Score: 10 AP (Writing: 508 words)
+5 AP (Personal Work Bonus)
Total AP per submission: 15

Base Score: 5 GP (Writing: 508 words)
Total GP per submission: 5

Base Score: 10 AP (Shaded Illustration)
+5 AP (Full Body)
+20 AP (Full/Scenic Background)
+5 AP (Personal Work Bonus)
+25 AP (Event Bonus) (mountain biome event, story prompt, color pallet challenge)
Total AP per submission: 65

Base Score: 4 GP (Shaded Illustration)
+2 GP (Full Body)
+6 GP (Full/Scenic Background)
+12 GP (Event Bonus)
Total GP per submission: 24
(I hope I did the scoring right....)

total:80 AP & 31GP