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Progress Report Screenie for one of my prints... Lines are completed I guess, this is a base-colours test... Everything look in order? Should I revise the colours I have chosen for the swimsuits before shading it? I was tired as it was 5:30am when I completed it.

Just like to get some input on the image... Anatomy is sketchy because I didn't want to copy the simplified lineart of the original, rather giving it my own flavour... but it looked ugly with proper anatomy... so I kinda met it halfway, does it still look good? or should I simplify it further? BURGH *_*

The print will be A4 at 300dpi (DAMN YOU PRINTERS!!!) This preview is at 50%

I hate drawing at such high resolution... But I need to get used to it to start doing prints ;O;

Amendments made since last report:
-Natsumi's arm has been lengthened [Special thanks to for pointing out my stupidity ;A;]
-Composition has been slightly widened balancing the pic overall. Momo-chan's ass is now more visible as well as a few other minor details, it's not that noticeable but I think it's an improvement.
-Koyuki's pose/guides COMPLETELY revamped, she looks a lot more like herself now :3

Ammendments to be made:
-Natsumi's crotch still too wide? My g/f thinks so, but I think it looks okay, what about you guys?

Characters are all ©Mine Yoshizaki

Description
Progress Report Screenie for one of my prints... Lines are completed I guess, this is a base-colours test... Everything look in order? Should I revise the colours I have chosen for the swimsuits before shading it? I was tired as it was 5:30am when I completed it.

Just like to get some input on the image... Anatomy is sketchy because I didn't want to copy the simplified lineart of the original, rather giving it my own flavour... but it looked ugly with proper anatomy... so I kinda met it halfway, does it still look good? or should I simplify it further? BURGH *_*

The print will be A4 at 300dpi (DAMN YOU PRINTERS!!!) This preview is at 50%

I hate drawing at such high resolution... But I need to get used to it to start doing prints ;O;

Amendments made since last report:
-Natsumi's arm has been lengthened [Special thanks to for pointing out my stupidity ;A;]
-Composition has been slightly widened balancing the pic overall. Momo-chan's ass is now more visible as well as a few other minor details, it's not that noticeable but I think it's an improvement.
-Koyuki's pose/guides COMPLETELY revamped, she looks a lot more like herself now :3

Ammendments to be made:
-Natsumi's crotch still too wide? My g/f thinks so, but I think it looks okay, what about you guys?

Characters are all ©Mine Yoshizaki