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Published: 2009-09-25 16:11:12 +0000 UTC; Views: 26019; Favourites: 385; Downloads: 803
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I'm trying so hard to come up with a 'fill out this report/fill out dem jeans' pun and it's just not working. Just pretend there was one.Anyway, I'm still kinda on the fence with Star Ocean 3. On the one hand it's kinda fun on occasion, on the other hand Sophia and her clones just won't go away.
However, the one thing she's got going for her is a surprisingly nice butt prominently displayed via the glory of tight jeans throughout the whole opening. And they're even unzipped somehow. I know it's a beach fashion thang for some reason, but hey, doesn't pop up too often in the vidja games.
So, anyway, now she's knocked up as per the norm. I don't know who is scanning her ass, nor do I understand why.
Sophia Esteed (C) Square-Enix and whatever this half of the remnants of Wolfteam call themselves these days.
Fanart is *HidonRedux 's.
EDIT: Ah hah hah holy shit I spelled analysis wrong what the fuck.
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Comments: 16
While the whole Star Ocean series is foreign to me. I must say this picture is well done.
That being said, I first must point out the flaws.
You returned to a more sketchy look to this picture. unlike your last few submissions that were cleaned up a lot more.
In the panel on the left, the lines around her left arm leave a lot to be desired. The lines framing her body seem a bit dark and too thick. Instead of outlining her you are framing her. It isn't nice looking to be honest.
The background is blase. Very much cut and pasted in it would appear. Nothing special. Honestly I would have though something more along the lines of a grocery store would have been more appropriate. Something showing where other people might be to see her "big butt"
In the right panel the sketchiness of the pic comes to the forefront. Especially around her waistband near the thong ties. The lines defining her buttocks inside her jeans leave a lot to be desired. I can see where you were going with it, trying to make them look tight around an ample butt, however I personally feel you fell short. Cleaning up the lines with an eraser or coloring over the smaller lines would have made this picture a lot better.
The last critique I am going to make is this: The pose from the left panel is not consistent with the right panel. The semi dashes you posted to show the backside of the girl should be showing her as she is now, not as you wanted her to be while looking in the mirror or something. In the future, it will be easier on the eyes if you were to make pictures like this have continuity when showing the same character from a different angle. yes I know it is more difficult, but in the long run it will make you a better artist.
That all being said, here are the things I liked about the picture:
In the left panel You gave her larger than average bosoms a hefty look, as though they actually have weight and are pulling against her top.
The belly poking out from the unbutton and unzipped pants is very cute and well done. You gave the panel depth with the curve to the girls back.
The right panel I like how the lines came out showing where her skin would natural fold and crease. The line showing her spine, is especially good to note. It gives her a depth that a lot of artists lack. The lines showing where her arms move at the joint (in her armpit) also the lines showing where her belly leaves the sides of her belly to blossom forward.
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Marked 4 out of 5 for everything except technique. Lowered in technique due to the sketchiness of the picture.
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She's cute but she needs to go cloths shopping NOW!
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I found the Star Ocean girls rather diverse and unique - if there were any Sophia clones, then - as a major fan - I'd certainly know about them!
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I meant in the literal sense; like the chick on the first non-SciFi planet you spend half the game on.
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Oh yeah - I completely forgot about Ameena! But then again, she's too thin to be Sophia - particularly this version of her!
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I see london, I see france, I see this cuties underpants.
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Cute pic. It's probably Fayt
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i like sophia. but i never finished the game. i always thought the big blonde guy sounded like will ferrell. XD
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I believe it's me, scanning such a wonderful ass
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