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hildegarde — Eclipse by-nd
Published: 2008-04-10 05:33:16 +0000 UTC; Views: 379; Favourites: 3; Downloads: 21
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Description I find it overly romantic
when the world stops
every time our tongues collide.
And I like it
when I overshadow the twinkling stars
just because I outshine them all
with my defying role as your lady.

The bystanders and the stars
are our spectators,
the moon’s mild glow
is our spotlight,
and the busy streets




our stage.


You are a great actor
but between us,
I am greater.
In fact, I may be the greatest among all
for in this dramatic piece,
I play the most challenging role.

Behind my exquisite role as your woman
is a cunning vixen
who hides her deceptions
at the back of her I love you’s and I miss you’s.
And it’s funny
that the whole universe never knew of my deceitfulness

and you never discovered


that I am also somebody else’s lover.
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Comments: 18

donkolondoy [2008-04-28 07:51:02 +0000 UTC]

waah.. this is awesome..
kewl.. nka2relate ako..

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hildegarde In reply to donkolondoy [2008-04-28 11:49:41 +0000 UTC]

wow. thanks.
hehe napa-simple pero makatotohanan ksi nung theme kaya siguro nakakarelate ka.

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donkolondoy In reply to hildegarde [2008-04-29 02:44:56 +0000 UTC]

hala.. at hindi ko pa nafave!~

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hildegarde In reply to donkolondoy [2008-04-29 11:38:31 +0000 UTC]

wahaha thanks for the fave!

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mhaezthro [2008-04-21 13:32:38 +0000 UTC]

na what if this is happening to me.. hehe.. un ang mahirap sa long distance relationship eh.. it makes you paranoid.. hehe..

hmmnn.. sana i could write like this again.. hehe. nakakasulat lng ako if im extremely happy.. pro mas madalas kapag bitter or depressed.. hehe..

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hildegarde In reply to mhaezthro [2008-04-24 07:42:09 +0000 UTC]

thing is, this isn't about long distance relationship YET the female is still cheating her partner. XD

ako? nakakasulat lang ako pag tulog ang puso ko at gising ang imahinasyon ko. sana minsan makabasa ako ng mga gawa mo.

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mhaezthro In reply to hildegarde [2008-04-24 13:26:17 +0000 UTC]

heh.. uin na nga eh. what more kung long distance sila.. tsk tsk..

anyways.. keep on writing.. as for me.. maybe when the time comes.. makapagsulat ulit ako..

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hildegarde In reply to mhaezthro [2008-04-27 11:12:50 +0000 UTC]

sure.. hintayin ko mga gawa mo.

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mhaezthro [2008-04-18 20:26:55 +0000 UTC]

awww... it made me think... tsk tsk...

galing..

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hildegarde In reply to mhaezthro [2008-04-21 10:00:02 +0000 UTC]

why did it make you think?

hehe thanks..

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ermitanyongiskagero [2008-04-11 11:25:14 +0000 UTC]

ang galing nito, maika, kahit pang deceptions, shweet pa rin..

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hildegarde In reply to ermitanyongiskagero [2008-04-13 09:02:12 +0000 UTC]

wow naman kuya jay.. hehe, thanks.. pang mga ganyan ata ako eh. hahaha..

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tarushiru [2008-04-10 18:06:55 +0000 UTC]

narcissism overload...


i love your imagination, sis... unless... it's not imagination anymore...

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hildegarde In reply to tarushiru [2008-04-11 10:07:30 +0000 UTC]

haha, that's why i entitled it ECLIPSE. intrimitida masyado.

my imagination is asleep when i'm in love. so i'm always thankful when i'm not..

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tarushiru In reply to hildegarde [2008-04-11 16:43:42 +0000 UTC]

pareho pala tayo... tulog ang imahinasyon kung in love...

i know i shouldn't feel bad about it.. pero minsan, naasar ako wala akong nasusulat...

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hildegarde In reply to tarushiru [2008-04-13 09:06:46 +0000 UTC]

pag inlab kasi, ung isip ko andun lang sa taong kinaiinlaban ko. haha! lumilipad imahinasyon ko.. XD

hello?? normal kaya un. kahit naman ako naiinis kapag wla akong naisususlat..

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damnedlostsoul [2008-04-10 05:52:44 +0000 UTC]

naks..


kaya nasa deviant pa din ako e..



masarap magbasa ng mga ganito..

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hildegarde In reply to damnedlostsoul [2008-04-10 06:56:07 +0000 UTC]

sa ganyan umiikot mundo ko ngayon.
lust, clandestine romance and deceptions.
i miss writing macabre stuffs..

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