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ForewordA crunch sounded as the book was opened. Hard fingers stroked across red leathers as eyes fell upon yellow pages.
“My name is Ryker. Years ago, I was an infamous Qin’ean thief. I lived my life like the wind: I never looked back, I never walked back and I never stayed in one place. One day, my life changed forever, and I experienced betrayal, a rebellion, love and a place worse than Hell.
“I remember it as if it happened yesterday:
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Strangely enough, I wrote a small introduction for Weltschmerz a long time ago that sounded like this. Great minds think alike, hu ?
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Yup, Great and weird minds think alike. I just needed an introduction that would help people realize that it was told from a story, but I'd like to include different perspectives so I don't know if I'm gonna keep the 1st-person-view or change it to third-pov. What do you think?
Btw, did you get the note concerning Chura? If you did, please reply.
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You know, I read that book, not so long ago, it was a Swedish thriller, I think, about some women getting murdered. We had the POVs of the police officer, the daughter, the husband, the sexual delinquant next door and even the woman's. Each of them was written in a different style (ie. the sexual dude was in first person while the officer's was in third). It worked really well conveying diverse perspectives. Perhaps you should give this method a try ?
Oupsie, yes, got it ! I'll read it
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Hoe you like it. I tried making him an innocent mini-Ryker, if there even is such a thing.
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Innocent mini-Ryker ? Hehehe, interesting.
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Yeah, he's Ryker ability wise, but too young to be as sexual.
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Yes, being a 12/13 boy... Hum, I'm half-way from finishing reading. I like it for now.
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