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Published: 2012-01-26 03:53:12 +0000 UTC; Views: 399; Favourites: 20; Downloads: 0
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Old drawing from the October of 2011I didn't focus on arms or wings or, actually every thing except the face lol
I might fix it once I get my tablet pen replaced :/
That Luka's hands just bother me so much haha
Any comments/critiques are welcome
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Comments: 10
Foedus [2012-01-26 04:17:45 +0000 UTC]
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Overall the picture is beautiful, your painting skills are simply superb, and your style is one to be admired, most definitely. The only thing I seem to find odd is the way her face looked. It doesn't seem to fit, or something seems a bit off about the way it is drawn on the shape of the head.
In a way, it's almost lopsided, as if her lips are pulled up on her chin a bit too high, and the areas around her cheeks and eyes are a bit too wide. Her left hand seems a bit wierd as well, though over all, the picture is genuinely good.
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HonG-t In reply to Foedus [2012-01-26 04:45:45 +0000 UTC]
Wow thanks for the critique
I've always thought that my style wasn't that attractive, so it was surprising to hear that you like my style. I've noticed that the face is a bit off by doing the horizontal flip thing after I finished the thing. I gotta work more on checking midways during WIPs! I think your critique was a good reminder that I should work harder on anatomy. Thank you for that!
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Foedus In reply to HonG-t [2012-01-26 04:49:29 +0000 UTC]
Of course, I'm glad you found my critique useful!
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AzurefireAKTE [2012-03-06 07:30:21 +0000 UTC]
Woww, even though you say you didn't focus on anything but the face, everything else just seems so perfect! When you get your pen fixed, though, you may want to add more fine detail to the rest of the body that way it can stand out amongst all the softness/luminescence of the background and wings
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FrostBo [2012-01-26 04:02:23 +0000 UTC]
WOW your skill is soooo impressive, i love it really much
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HonG-t In reply to FrostBo [2012-01-26 04:50:13 +0000 UTC]
Thanks
I don't think it's that impressive with 4 O's, but....
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