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HorrorRuby7 — Take Your Time
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Published: 2014-07-11 01:50:48 +0000 UTC; Views: 563; Favourites: 4; Downloads: 0
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"I'll wait for you." ficletStory by: as a gift to
Word Count: ~ 313 words
Fandom: TMNT 2003 ((AU! Human!Turtles))
Warning: Tcest. Don't like? Don't read!
Michelangelo sat immobile under the strong embrace of Raphael. They were locked within each other. They were interwoven as one- In mind, body, and spirit.
Michelangelo felt his heart beat desperately in his chest. Raphael did as well and tightened his grip around his lover. He rested his head against the dirty lion mane that was his lover's hair and closed his eyes.
Never had a silence spoke so loudly. It screamed loving serenades and both listened very carefully, not wanting to forget the precious songs of their life. Of each other.
Michelangelo used his thin hand to caress Raphael's chest. He slipped it under his camouflage shirt and felt Raphael's broad chest. Raphael grabbed Michelangelo's face and gave him a long, lusty kiss on his pouty lips.
Michelangelo moved to unbuttoned Raphael's khaki pants before his eyes fell upon two dog tags that hung mockingly- almost sinister-like - from his love's neck.
Michelangelo stood straightaway, unable to take anymore of the torture . He crossed his arms (to comfort himself) and stood in front of his partner.
He was terrified. Horrified. petrified of this. He didn't want Raphael to go. Not tomorrow. Not ever.
Raphael stared at him with melancholic eyes. He wanted to stay with his partner forever. But he just couldn't. He just couldn't.
You'll get killed!
I'll be careful...
Michelangelo blinked the tears that threatened to spill from his eyes. He looked away; dejected.
This time Raphael stood. He grabbed his lover and pulled him in to a deep, tender buss. They pulled apart and Raphael stared intensely at Michelangelo.
I love you. I'll do my duties quick.
Take your time...
Michelangelo looked back before nodding. The two lovers shared one more kiss before spending the night entangled within another's embrace.
I'll wait for you...
END
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Comments: 8
First of all thank you so much this was a lovely unexpected gift to come home to. Secondly it is not sucky at all. I loved it especially the way you drew us in with the potential break up and then they way they drew together for their last few moments together, was lovely.
Thank you again for your kindness to me
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Oh, it was my pleasure!
Thank you so much! It means a lot to me!
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You are such an amazing person to write this amazing fanfiction for your friend and inspiration, you are so caring and it makes me wonder why everyone on Deviantart cant be as wonderful as you are, doing something selfless for your friends just to let them know how much you appreciate them writing their stories, its just a wonderful thing to do.
This fanfiction is just amazing, it all fits in perfectly with each other! Like when Mikey stops and see the dog tags on Raph's neck, I was confused for a second because I though that maybe Raph was already in the army, or they were the army tags of his last lover, maybe one that died? Then you show that Raph is leaving and everything makes sense, then sadness washes over you, poor Mikey! His Raphie is leaving him! You think, then Raph said he would hurry and when Mikey said no... I just died! I was like!!! NOOOO!! IS MIKEY BRAKING UP WITH HIM?!?!?! Then he says I will wait for you.
I sighed in relief then I realised what he said and I squeezed a little, it was really cute and brought the cuteness to the hole story! I cant wait to see you write more. <3
Have a wonderful day and don't be afraid to be your self! <3
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This... I just...
I dont remember the last time someone has ever taken the time to write such a long and meaningful comment like yours. It's always me who does it for others (and I almost always get an "Aww thx" it's really frustrating >.< I felt like no one appreciated my love... but I never stopped though 
I'm ecstatic that I didn't confuse anyone! 
I'll always be myself! YOU are the wonderful person here! Have a terrific day!!!!
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Ya I get you there, I'm always writing long and thoughtful comments only to get an: "Aww thanks buddy!" I guess I find it kind of annoying sometimes, I wrote this message to let them know that I really like what they have put out here and all they have to day is "Aww Thanks" Really? How would you not think of your self as selfless?! You just said you write these long messages to everyone just to get an "Aww thanks" Back but you never stopped did you? You keep doing it because you KNOW it makes other people feel good. Isn't that one of the most important quality in a selfless person?
XD Well you achieved it perfectly! 
It amazing to hear that.
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Im just saying... I just do it because it what I love to do. I hate when people are upset 
I dunno >w> I guess I didnt mean it THAT way. A lot of people liked Hi, I'm Mikey! so that's good... but... idk there's just so many great wirters and it makes mine look like rubbish ;.;
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Lol I guess it is. XD
Just because some people write better doesn't mean yours is like rubbish, it means that there is always room for some improvement, everyone can make it better the more they go over it, but just because they don't write like you, or have more watchers doesn't mean they do a better job then you. It means that some people like their style of writing a little more than yours. That's all.
Keep up the amazing writing and again have an amazing day. <3
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