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Published: 2013-08-21 08:59:48 +0000 UTC; Views: 1374; Favourites: 19; Downloads: 0
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TANTISSIMI AUGURI DI BUON COMPLEANNO A ~Raphalangela
Yaaay!
Today's Yucchan's birthday♥ And this is my present for her~ If you say you weren't expecting this, you're lying.LacxSayu, because who cares about canon? I don't.
XD
And you know that I love them just so muuuuch~ They'd make such a cool couple, and they're so funny to draw xD
Also another Fantasy/Hell AU because I don't have better ideas (ç____ç) and it's the one who suits them the most.
Thanks to Panic! At the disco for the title x3
Art © ~HoshinoDestiny
Sayuri © ~Raphalangela
Lachlan © ~HoshinoDestiny
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Comments: 15
Lovely work. You've faced a difficult challenge with more than one character.
Your biggest issue I see is hands, all the hands are seriously disfigured. Thats okay because its not such a bad thing to be facing, the faces are lovely, and the colouring is effective.
A few pointers I would say is, when drawing imagine it 3D, as in, imagine how she would be sitting, her legs would be raised because her legs are underneath his. Its simple things like this that make a large difference.
Hands are tricky, so studies will be important here. Break up the hands structure, thing in light and shadow, or building blocks. Its not an easy path and its something you're just going to have to do, unfortunately! ( Wouldn't we all want quick fixes?! )
As I said, you've took on quite a challenge, and for the flaws your piece has, it should still be said that you have done well in consideration to the difficulties you faced.
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Thank you a lot for your critique!
Yes, as it is easily noticeable, hands are my biggest flaw; I already try to use a scheme, but I'm not really comfortable with it, I guess I need to look for more tutorials
I'll try to do some studies and focus on one thing per time, too!
Thank you again♥
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Very cool!!! 
I see a lot of body parts in the background, is that the fault of Lac and Sayu?^^
His black-blue curly hair looks very beautifull. You really can draw handsome characters :3
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Thanks a lot
They're sitting on a throne... placed on a pile of... corpses, bones and other "nice" things o-o""
Well, that's supposed to be the underworld, so maybe not... but otherwise, it would be all Sayuri's fault XD Lachlan hates getting dirty (and blood too)!
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Waaah! Its so cool, has such a Halloween spirit too, though I cant help but notice that from the shoulder to the wrist for the man are too huge. or was it supposed to be like that? Other than that I think everything else is great. You did quite the good job on it ^^
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Thank you a lot, I'm really glad you like it... and that I was able to give it a cool atmosphere
You're right: it's not supposed to look like this! He's not that buff I didn't noticed it while drawing >_>
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Your welcome hehe XD
It happens a lot to me too, when drawing it looks ok but when done, coloured then submitted I notice like thousandths of errors, it gets to the point where its scary sometimes.
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♥
Yeah, it always bother me to no end, since I always notice major mistakes when it's way too late to fix them >_>
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Oh mamma che bello!!! *_______* L'atmosfera macabra è fantastica e mio dio che fighi che sono!! *^* Le loro espressioni!!! *A* Il vestito della Sayu/Hel!!!! *_______* 
stica del crack! Noi li amiamo comunque
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Aaaaaaaaw 
Buahahahahahah La mia brutta influenza torna a farsi sentire~
Ma certo♥♥
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Si!!! Dannata!!!!
Oddio immagino D: Ma-ma...è BELLISSIMO!!!! ç/////////ç
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BUAHAHAHAHAH! ORMAI NESSUNO POTRA' FERMARMI!
Ssssshh, si può shippare tutto, qui♥
Grazie ancora ç__________ç
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Waaah che figata tesoro, mi piace un casino!
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Grazie mille
Ahahahahahah, trovo che quei due starebbero gran bene in questo tipo di ambientazione :3
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