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The Blood wolf's destiny(tnx for voting ^^)
Tnx guys for helping me and all ^^
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Cover Issue 1 Team ^^
traditional art aka Blue Print by
moon and stars background by
digital, character coloring, and ground, & Cliff and dark background by
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Well, given what other people say about the cover, I'm gonna toss my opinions in with everyone else and I am well aware that I might be the only person who actually detests the cover. I am older, yes, and even when I was young, I never got into the fad of adding weird colors to wolves and giving them wings. Maybe it's just the fact that they're so oddly colored that turns me off when I see this cover. Maybe your story is good, but since I don't see a disclaimer as to who actually wrote this, I am being skeptical about that too. Ah, here are the reasons why I frown a bit at your cover.
The background reminds me of New Mexico, Arizona, and Nevada for some reason, because of the pleateu these furry animals are sitting on. The background, while low-tech, is fine, I won't necessarily go into big detail, but the background overwhelms the wolves in that there's a lot of space that can be filled in if you made the characters a bit bigger.
The wolves are my second problem. I don't know why they're so oddly colored like that; it can at times be very distracting, and I was having a hard time even reading the expressions of the two wolves behind the blue and yellow one because of how the black marrs the faces. If there was a plot synopsis as to the origins of the wings and why even those are different, I might get a better understanding. So far, I don't know if I want to read the story, considering it might not be for me. In my opnion, to make the comic better, I suggest putting more character than background. What exactly are these wolves looking at, and stuff.
Best of luck to your comic as always,
Snuffie
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I dont not own all the wolves here ther are infact the FURSONAS (a reflection of you in an animal with fur) of the different people here in DA
I own the black wolf with white and blue stripes.
SO DONT ONLY TELL ME THIS THERES HUNDREDS OF PEOPLE WHO PUTS COLOR ON WOLVES
IT'S SOME SORT OF INDIVIUALITY...
WELL IT WOULD BE BORING IF ALL THE 500,000 WOLVES WHERE BLACK, BROWN,CREAM, &WHITE. RIGHT?
(I MADE THIS STORY) (I have a lot of people helping me)
The background is based on my vision I never copied it from anyone
I know that ^^' it's hard to resize pictures when your not using photshop (I use corel) there was NO WAY to resize it there.(i really dont know it)
They all look at the moon (well all the adult wolves are( their expression is worried)) they look at the moon because the moon is somewhat special to them.
The cover needed to be the same size ok
Why I did'nt put a lot of chars? Because I wanna put only the first pack as protagonists (you'll get it)
I JUST TOLD MY CREW TO MAKE WOLVES SIT/ STAND OR WHATEVER AT A MOUNTAIN/ PLATEAU and LOOK AT THE MOON.
AS FOR THE BACKGROUND I JUST LIKE A SIMPLE ONE BUT WITH A STUNNING BEAUTIFUL MOON.
WE WERE ALL BEGGINERS DOING THIS COMIC... OK
(I CANT TELL THE OTHER STUFF THAT WOULD SPOIL THE COMIC)
AND YEAH I ANNOUCED IT BEFORE ON MY JOURNAL THAT I WAS GONNA RE-DO THIS COMIC IN TRADITIONAL WHILE I WAIT FOR MY MOM TO BUY ME ADOBE PHOTSHOP 7
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Well, I know what a Fursona is, though if you're also going to add them in the story, that's even worse. Unless their personalities are perfect for the plot, there's gonna be moments where writer's block is going to be consistant. If the personalities are molded into these animals, you can disregard my comment.
[SO DONT ONLY TELL ME THIS THERES HUNDREDS OF PEOPLE WHO PUTS COLOR ON WOLVES]
I never said 'hundreds of people'. But yeah, I can type 'wolf' on the search engine and get some colored monstrosity. Though I never said hundreds of people, but I will admit there are a bunch of people who do that.
[IT'S SOME SORT OF INDIVIUALITY...]
Understandable. You, and many others, want to give a wolf some weird color because it's what you like and what you are. You can also do that in the personality of the wolf, and not have to give it some odd color to show that it's different, that's it's a part of you. Basically, anything you create has a piece of you in it already. It has to be: YOU MADE IT.
[WELL IT WOULD BE BORING IF ALL THE 500,000 WOLVES WHERE BLACK, BROWN,CREAM, &WHITE. RIGHT?]
True, it would be boring. But what's even more of a bore is to witness a wolf with the typical rainbow mottled pattern too, and have absolutely no personality. Take for instance, when I work on a story. I don't go 'human colors are boring; let me give this guy green hair and this girl can have pink'. What I do to make the character stand out is to flesh them out from the inside rather than just give him/her some odd coloration in the hair and weird clothing design. They're pretty, but if all I do is focus on what they look like, they become eye candy, which is good, but it seriously lacks in any nutritional value.
It all depends on the character's reactions, personality, inner thoughts, etc, that makes them unique, and not that you must have to give it a new colorful design.
[(I MADE THIS STORY) (I have a lot of people helping me)]
Ah,okay.
[The background is based on my vision I never copied it from anyone
I know that ^^' it's hard to resize pictures when your not using photshop (I use corel) there was NO WAY to resize it there.(i really dont know it)]
Alright. I just pointed out that the background looks a bit too much, though your suggestion is understandable.
Yes, you are beginners and it shows. It's not insulting; we all start somewhere.
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I got very insulted at first but it's ok now 
yup your right ^^
so you get some of my my points and i got yours
I'll regard this comment
Well this comic at first looks childish but in the later parts will be brutal
and yes those wolves are colorful but i choose which wolf is better at which I asked their owners what personalities they have, likes, dislikes, hobbies (hunting, sleeping,etc.)
I put the wolves where they are suited like omegas for example their wise so i chose a calm, nice, caring and wise wolf
So yeah I thought about that earlier the personalities I mean
I even thought of one wolf that was afraid of something so somewhere in the story I'll make him/her face that something.
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Wow, I love the moon and I like how some of them are looking at it. <3 Keep up the great work cute comic
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WoooooooooooooooooooW thatz awsum!!!!*favs*
Why i didnt see it before!!!
The Bloood Wolf's Destiny is a really great title!!
Itz sooooooooo mysterious...
Lol, great work, it came out really well!!^^
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where ar I :'( *cry* and this page is soo cute
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oh yeah ^^ this is batch 1 aka pack # 1(heroes of the story/protagonists)
then then the next issue cover will be batch 2 aka pack # 2 (villains/ antagonists)
then the third will be batch 3 aka pack # 3 (wanderers/ friends and allies of pack # 1)
that's where you are (pack # 3)
Got it ^^
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O,yeah ^^ sorry =3
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hey! ^^ NP pls wait for a few mins ^^
I will be posting the irst page ^^
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I meant First Page ^^
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Nomnom It Looks Great Noaw C:
Awsom Job's Y'Booth X3
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Response to before comment:
mmm, both arden and eclipse. you forgot a stripe on eclipse's neck, and some of the colors are wrong on the markings on arden. 
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there you go^^ I edited it ^^
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oh ok ^^' I'll chage that ^^ I knew somethings wrong ^^
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wow that turned out really nicely. Great job (and the title sounds soooooo cool!) ^/-\^
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Coooool ! The wolves are so cute , you did a super job
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aw thank you ^^
also thank for making the wolves cute ^^
She did the traditional art
while i did digital and colored it ^^
oh yeah coukd you tell to send me the story of the bbafan comic ^^
I'm gonna help (by being a critic (or more))
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ok I will, when she will be in MSN
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