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This is a pretty good pic. But I think you should have exchanged the places of the pink spa pony. Because the backround color of Trixie is clashing to the blue spa pony's background color and I think Trixie must be in another pose..but other than that It is a good pic. The bold colors are very eye catching!! I admire your work very much!
Vision: Eye-catchingly perfect
Originality: Good but more practice!
Technique:AWESOME!!
Impact: COOL!!!!
I really LOVE your work but, there's only some LITTLE things that I think should improve. You draw really good. I like it . C:
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This is one of the pieces of art here on dA that actually caught my attention. Most of that is because of the colors. They are bold, eye-catching, and make people browsing through the art very curious about the rest of the art. It's really difficult to tell where the light is, though. I think you could have done better incorporating Trixie into all of it instead of having her just standing to the side--it kind of gives the impression that she's not really suppose to be in the drawing at all.
Overall, I think you did a pretty good job, but a little more time and effort could have made a big difference.
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I think that tis picture is adorable and that no matter what people say it will all ways meen something more to someone else.
Vision: I think the colours are very nice and bold and eye catching.
Oringinality: I think that it is original because this is what you see on the tv.
Technique: I think that you drew this picture well.
Impact: It has a lot of impact because the colours are bold, the picture is quite cute, it is sweet as well and that if you were to change it little girls would be upset so KEEP THE PICTURE HERE.
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I imagine that you just flipped the image and recolored it for the spa ponies, which is fine, but you could have spent some time adjusting the lighting. Other than that, it's very well done I think. It's simple, and eye-catching, and of course adding Trixie into anything doesn't hurt either, at least in my opinion. I will say though, that I'm not sure if ans is supposed to mean something as an acronym of some sort, or if you just made a typo when you posted it. If it's a typo, it probably couldn't hurt to fix it.
All in all I'll give you an eight out of ten. Kudos.
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I don't get the impression that this was ever intended to be a "scene," or anything more than a drawing of three ponies. That was, as far as I can tell, the vision for this drawing, and you captured it fine. Trixie as a spa pony is well rendered in particular. You managed to make her fit the spa pony look with extremely minimal adjustment to her canon design, and you did it well. She "fits."
As for originality, there's more in the concept than the implementation, I think. I would never have thought of Trixie as a spa pony before, and that's coming from someone who particularly likes the spa ponies as background ponies. This just isn't anything I've ever seen anyone think of before.
That said, there's not much here in the way of original implementation. It's JUST the ponies. I kind of feel the need to emphasize that this is NOT a bad thing, necessarily. When dealing with fan art in particular, cleaving to the original material can be beneficial. Some of my favorite pieces are ones I wouldn't necessarily give high marks in terms of originality, because these are established characters, and getting too far from the canon can bother me. When a drawing is just some ponies, and not an event or a scene, or a re-imagining, originality is honestly the least important component.
Your technique is solid here. There's room to grow and improve, but generally speaking, the ponies are recognizable, cute, and enjoyable to look at. There's no big, masterful, gasp in awe accomplishment here in terms of technique, but I do feel like you've got talent. It's an image I'd save. Regarding the winking, I wouldn't ordinarily mention it, but since it was called out in another critique as a negative, I think it works well here. The eyes don't look like they're spazzing out to me or anything like that. It's clearly a playful, coquettish wink, mirrored with the spa ponies, to go with their inverted colors, and it's nice. I'm not as sure about it with Trixie, but I understand why you did it--to keep her in form with the two other ponies. The only thing that caught me as far as technique is that it looks like the button/jewel/whatever on Trixie's collar is out of place. That might be intentional, but it doesn't seem so to me. Regardless, that's a minor complaint.
There's not a ton of impact to this piece, but again, that's not always a bad thing when you're just drawing ponies and not a scene. Nothing about this grabs me and makes me excited, or evokes major emotion, but it's CUTE, and when we're talking about technicolor ponies, there's nothing at all wrong with cute.
As a general thought on the composition, I might have put Trixie in the center, flanked by the spa ponies, with both eyes open, and had the closed eyes be the ones on the outside. You were clearly going for symmetry with the spa ponies, and achieved it well, but Trixie kind of throws it off. By putting her in the middle, eyes open, with winking eyes on the outside, you could've worked Trixie into that symmetry.
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.....................................srry
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It's okay. 
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i found it on roblox on my friend's account
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For being objective, and providing constructive criticism when the artist specifically flagged it for a critque?
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i didn't really get it that much, mostly because the name has a mis-spelling and i don't get it.
vision:the coloring is good, the drawing is good, but the name, isn't. i really don't get the thing about their eyes blinking and spazzing out.
originality:it is kinda original, but not really. you could see the exact same thing on the show.
technique:the coloring isn't that good. there could have at least been a background, or maybe other colors, or the picture could have been colored in all the way.
impact:doesn't really impact people much. mostly just girly stuff. would only appeal to girls, or gay people. im a guy, so i didn't really get it at all. it is way to girly.
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thank for critique.I will improve at next drawing ^^
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you are wecome. just trrying to help.
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I could see this happening. Better than a rock farm.
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Well...working in the Spa with the Twins is still better than working on a Rock Farm.
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Given the color of the Eyes and Buttons on the Spa Ponies, I get the impression that Trixie wants to be paired with Twilight
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Sweet! The spa ponies Aloe & Lotus are two of my favorites and Trixie looks cute dressed for a day of working in the spa! Great pic!
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I have a distinct feeling that Trixie might not have the required "customer comes first" mentality that would be required for this sort of job, but I DO have to admit she's looking pretty darn good as a spa pony! And who knows, maybe the events of The Magic Duel finally taught her the lesson that she apparently failed to learn after Boast Busters.
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Any chance we could get a version of this with just Trixie?
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I wouldnt mind getting a massage from Trixie, there needs to be episode where trixie visits ponyville again and tries to find another job since her magic performances aren't doing too good and at one part she becomes a spa pony and where she has to give a massage to the biggest, smelliest pony in ponyville (i can only imagine her expression there XD). Great job on this ^_^
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Trixie as a spa pony? Well she certainly sports the look!
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Wow, Trixie sure does make a good spa pony.
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i think this picture is very cute and little girls will love this picture very much as this is what is produced on the tv.
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no it is not. the show is for dudes like me
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I would have preferred Vera in the picture as well, and maybe Roxie.
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The pic is epic, I like the twins and Trixie a lot.
Vera is missing though-but the avatar makes up for it.
I noticed the black/white preview and would have known.
Would be great to have them as a wallpaper..
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