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Vitani-Le [2005-04-11 20:18:11 +0000 UTC]

With the star field, I think only the biggest of the stars are too bright, however, the other stars look very pixelated - very square-shaped and defined, like maybe they should fade into the background a little more. ^^ I think shrinking the pic just a little bit would solve that, and maybe help with the planet's texture, too. But the texture really isn't bad at all, I doubt I could do any better with the blurriness.

I've read through Alyn's tutorial too, it's really great. I even favorited it for future reference. ^^ The only problem I have is that I have no idea how to "build up" a planet's texture - I take photos of textures, and blend them together to create my planet's texture. I just can't find good enough textures to make dramatic planets. oO;

But anyway, I hope that helped you get on your way to creating new space art. ^^

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Vitani-Le [2005-04-11 00:09:54 +0000 UTC]

Hey, for your first space art, that's great! ^_^ The dust clouds look very nice, and the stars have personality, being spaced out unevenly and such. And the atmosphere and texture on the planet are awesome - did you make that texture yourself? It has some wonderful detail. ^^ My only crits would be that the stars are a bit too bright and pixelated, you may want to shrink those down a bit, like you said. And that the texture of the planet seems a little too smooth, appearing as though a blur has been put on it. But overall, it's really nice. Congrats! ^.^

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