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Published: 2013-01-05 20:54:18 +0000 UTC; Views: 671; Favourites: 42; Downloads: 1
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I've opened my point commissions back up! Go check out my profile for more info~
>u< Finally finished! This is for my amazing, superduper awesomesqueak friend~ *Coolginn ! <33
Please go and watch her~ her art is amazing and she's just plain awesome, and you can eat her. ouo

So, I saw she opened these amazing adoptables, and I just couldn't decide which one to adopt! ;~; Then I picked this beautiful gal~
She is just... so awesome Dinneh. eue Thankyou so much~

So, another addition to my small family of OC's! ^u^ I have currently recruited~ Java, Fae, Spark, and IthinksomethingSnowey'sdoingformee! <33 I can't wait! ^3^

Sorry Dinneh~ made a few minor adjustments, but I hope it all looks okay! ouo""""""
I just love her bandana by teh way, it just suits her so well! And her markings and design ish just so amazing. Thankyou for this beautiful creature! <33

I've named her Spark by teh way. ouo It just suited her personality, in my mind. And I'll do a proper ref sheet for her as soon as possible! >3< As soon as I've done one for Fae+Java!

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Character © Coolginn|Blackcatpro(Does it belong to me now? o~o I'm so confused!)
Art © Blackcatpro|Me
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Comments: 20

jvsef [2013-01-10 23:30:56 +0000 UTC]

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Hello *BlackCatPro ! e.deviantart.net/emoticons/l/l… " width="19" height="19" alt="" title="La la la la"/>

I think you are an incredible artist for your age. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Big Grin)"/>

To improve on this piece, however, I think that you should not make the "fluffs" of hair in just different parts of the body and be consistent. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Smile)"/>

Also, the tail can be improved on by being a little thinner. It's thicker than the legs which looks quite unrealistic.

Something else that I would like the bring up is the redness under the subject's eye. Why is that there and does it mean something?

Lastly, I know that this was intentional, but I'm not a huge fan of the way the image seems the disappear towards the bottom. I should definitely be able to see the bottom of the paws at least a bit translucent, don't you think?

I hope this helps! e.deviantart.net/emoticons/n/n… " width="35" height="31" alt="" title="#1"/>

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hushbee In reply to jvsef [2013-01-11 16:19:13 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for the great feedback!

I'll try and work on everything you suggested!

Well... the redness under the eye is actually sort of a blush, but it sort of went wrong... I try and improve it next time! ^u^

Thankyou!

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jvsef In reply to hushbee [2013-01-11 21:13:47 +0000 UTC]

Awesome!

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darklordAWSOMEDUDE In reply to jvsef [2013-01-10 23:41:32 +0000 UTC]

for once I agree with you. the closest I have to a problem is how you ever seen cartoons or japanese anime where the mistic animal does indeed have a large tail? and people love those tv mistic animals! and this is a mistic animal. but it does not work with all.

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hushbee In reply to darklordAWSOMEDUDE [2013-01-11 16:19:35 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! ^u^ I'll try and work on it next time...

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darklordAWSOMEDUDE In reply to hushbee [2013-01-11 17:04:59 +0000 UTC]

Your welcome

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Calicara [2013-01-06 04:47:40 +0000 UTC]

I really love your curvy lines, and just your style in general. It's so unique! :3

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hushbee In reply to Calicara [2013-01-06 10:01:43 +0000 UTC]

Squeeee! ;;;u;;; Thankyou sososo much Cali! <33
I love chur style too!

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PlGGE [2013-01-05 22:19:08 +0000 UTC]

auweijrh8wrejshutrifjd HOWWW DO YOU KEEP DRAWING SUCH AWESOME AND BEAUTIFUL ART.

*happy sobbing* amgicanseemyname

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hushbee In reply to PlGGE [2013-01-06 10:03:36 +0000 UTC]

;u; You... think it's awesome? ERMAIGAWDTHANKYOUDINNEH! <33333

Well yeah, obviously! ouo It's your character after all! Please do more adoptables! <3 I love your designs so much! eue

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PlGGE In reply to hushbee [2013-01-07 11:22:23 +0000 UTC]

atuewsrjhurweshueriwsdf OF COURSE I THINK IT'S AWESOME

u9ahutejwfhbgy7eruhfdgyurefjdhnhutjerwfsdhjrefd i willlll.

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hushbee In reply to PlGGE [2013-01-07 11:31:29 +0000 UTC]

Q////////u////////Q you'resonicetome~

Goodgood!>8D

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PlGGE In reply to hushbee [2013-01-08 20:35:31 +0000 UTC]

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ovo

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hushbee In reply to PlGGE [2013-01-09 16:22:26 +0000 UTC]

Ahmaigawd! New avatar! <33 SQUEE.

I love it! <33 Please keep it! ovo

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PlGGE In reply to hushbee [2013-01-09 20:56:40 +0000 UTC]

NEW AVATAR INDEED ovo

Although it's just gonna be there until I gets a new one

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hushbee In reply to PlGGE [2013-01-10 15:54:00 +0000 UTC]

Awww! ;u; No! I loved that other one!
But I love this one too... so, I don't mind! ^u^ ~<3

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PlGGE In reply to hushbee [2013-01-10 16:55:28 +0000 UTC]

xD Idk what I'm doing about my avatar.

I think I'll swap this for the non-transparent animated version owo

Or I'll use an old avatar ovo


jgtrfijtnh5u4irefksd idk

Your avatar's awesome though OAO

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hushbee In reply to PlGGE [2013-01-10 18:16:33 +0000 UTC]

X3 Lawl!
I love all your avatars! ^u^

Thankyou! ;u; My friend, Snoweh made it!

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Cirorin [2013-01-05 21:05:35 +0000 UTC]

The wings...are so beautiful ;w;
I love the colours so much <333
And chu are so good wif effects ;3;
Your works are always so ..sparkly and have this happy atmosphere ;u; <33

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hushbee In reply to Cirorin [2013-01-06 10:04:50 +0000 UTC]

;w; ndsan;lsnmd,a Thankyou! <333
I...I am? *dies of happiness*
Dankedankedankeee! ^3^

I am just so totally happy right now! <33

Oh, do you want me to explain to you about coding now?

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