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The arms look like they're broken
Sonic doesn't look OG enough in this picture
Try adding some snapbacks and chains on him, that will make him a real OG
Also add a GAT in his hand to make him a real niqqa
I'm just going to write this because Deviant Art requires me to write 100 words but I don't know what else to write
You gotta make him more niqqa cause hes not niqqa enough you kno whut im saying?
ye
so do dat and then bust back and crank back through time like a real og niqqa ye
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Alright, let`s not start with the arms cause you already know.
The background is great the colors blend great but you should practice other backgrounds and characters interacting with there surrounding.
Also you should work on his shoes a bit more he`s missing his gold buckle.
If your going for a modern version of him, his arms an legs and body needs to be more slender his spins and legs should be longer.
And there`s a few spots around his eyes and spins that you missed some color.
But this is just one picture you will get better! Keep practicing!
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Everyone has already mentioned it, so I'm not gonna take the time to nitpick at the arms. But I will say what everyone else had said, look at some other pictures of Sonic for reference. In the past, that's what I did when I wanted to draw a character. Plus, you're never going to get it right on the first try, you just have to keep practicing until you get the hang of it. If you don't practice, how will you ever get better?
The hands though are very spot on. Like, wow. Very good. Better then any hand I could ever draw. The legs, though, are a bit too wide for Sonic, as he is shown in games to have very thin arms arms and legs.
The nose should also be a little more centered on the face, but it's nothing too noticeable.
All in all, this is a very good drawing, and compared to your past drawings of Sonic, a big improvement! Just keep practicing and looking up refs for him and you will get the hang of it! ^^ (You also draw Sonic a heck of a lot better then me, just for the record xD)
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Let me just start by saying that you did a terrific job on the hands! They look realistic and cartoony at the same time, and are to proportion as well. However, there are two main problems that I'm having with this piece. 1 is that the proportions on the rest of Sonic's body are a little off. His arms and legs are a bit too wide and that really breaks the slick and moveable look that we all know and love Sonic for (after all, he has to be super aerodynamic in order to break the sound barrier... wait I think I'm just over-thinking it at this point XD). 2, is that the arm on the left is bugging me a bit. Mainly due to the fact that it's close off, rather than opened up, like you'd expect an arm to be.
All and all, If this is your first time drawing "The Blue Blur", than you're definitely off to a great start (it's worlds better than MY first few drawings of Sonic). If not, keep on practicing. I recommend looking at other people's art for refrence untill you get the hang of it, that helped me out A TON.
I hope I didn't take up too much of your time reading this critique, but I can't resist the chance to help out a fellow cartoonist e.deviantart.net/emoticons/w/w… " width="15" height="15" alt="
Happy Drawing! -dogatemyshrooms
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short and simple
left arm is coming out of his nipples
right arm is coming out of his back
besides that terrible flaw also what exactly is he doing? legs are just kind of floating there,limp and lifeless.
right ear seems to also be coming out of his forehead
go find a simple drawing of sonic, keep drawing it over and over again untill you understand how the body works. this drawing shows a complete lack of understanding on how a human-ish body is supposed to look. in your position i would have never even colored it, much less taken the time to upload here.
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aaah angry sonic fans priceless.
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I agree with these two.
Think first when your gonna make a critique like this.
Hypocrite...
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I love it how you are comparing this with how the body is supposed to work and then I look at your art, when you are drawing a bipedal creature it seems you do not really understand anatomy at all do you? Hypocrite.
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I agree with this guy. This looks all wrong unless its his first ever drawing...
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Great job. The only thing I would improve on if I were you would be his arms. They just seem to be floating around him. The arms themselves are well drawn but they aren't attached to his body properly. Everything else is really great though.
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