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Hyena97 In reply to OnePieceFreak15 [2017-10-07 06:33:18 +0000 UTC]

Simba tried to drive Tayo (Sarabi's son from Scar), believing that he not only looks like his uncle, but also character, and therefore carries in himself evil. Sarabi, of course, stood up for her son, believing that it does not matter who his father is, because children are not guilty of the sins of their parents. However, Simba was adamant, so the lioness declared that she was going into exile with Tayo. By the way, despite the hatred for Scar and the fear of him, to Nale, who, according to my version, is also his offspring, Simba has no complaints.

My English is not well so I translated it in Google Translator х)

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OnePieceFreak15 In reply to Hyena97 [2017-10-08 07:01:21 +0000 UTC]

Thank you for the story
I came from Germany. My English is not so good too.

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Malika-Draws In reply to Hyena97 [2017-10-07 08:05:54 +0000 UTC]

😊😊😊 interesting

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NttArts In reply to Hyena97 [2017-10-07 07:12:14 +0000 UTC]

Good job I think you did well

If you ever need an editor, let me know - i am an editing major

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Hyena97 In reply to NttArts [2017-10-07 07:37:05 +0000 UTC]

Oh thank you! *_*

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