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Lokiev [2010-12-16 01:43:35 +0000 UTC]

Just going to say a few things. ;D

- The dog stock and the foreground stock doesn't match with the background quality, so it looks kind of odd.
- Lighting. The dog should be a darker. Seems like the light is coming from the background, and the grass seems to suggest that also.
- I think the fog should gradually lessen upwards. For now, it seems clumped in one area like that, kind of odd.
- The vine kind of sticks out, too. The quality and all is different.

Yeah, okay.
That's what I can think of now.

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adictives [2010-12-15 22:45:16 +0000 UTC]

awww very qt i like it !

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