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Published: 2010-08-14 04:32:54 +0000 UTC; Views: 938; Favourites: 26; Downloads: 5
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Description her secrets fell
like raindrops on leaves
and desire rumbled
like thunder in the distance
as she whispered
through white lilies and lace

trust me
just me, trust me

though i already did
i begged for reasons
and reasons and reasons more
like thunder in the distance
as she whispered
through white lilies and lace

(i took four northbound flights
to gaze upon her northern lights
only to close my eyes
and breathe in her whisper)
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Comments: 30

blackcat111 [2015-03-13 03:20:00 +0000 UTC]

This is lovely..

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katarthis [2011-06-01 14:30:30 +0000 UTC]

Wow. This lovely piece made me stop for a breath at the end. I've traveled almost that far.

k

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dragon-fly-to-me [2010-12-19 02:09:31 +0000 UTC]

very nice.
Very visual and well done.
I like!

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Hyperionic-Xmissions In reply to dragon-fly-to-me [2010-12-23 23:22:11 +0000 UTC]

thank you

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Poetrymann [2010-10-24 19:45:57 +0000 UTC]

Lovely words.

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Hyperionic-Xmissions In reply to Poetrymann [2010-10-25 06:54:07 +0000 UTC]

thank you

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7ucille [2010-10-21 11:47:42 +0000 UTC]

"as she whispered
through white lilies and lace"


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Hyperionic-Xmissions In reply to 7ucille [2010-10-21 14:32:32 +0000 UTC]

comments with quotes are my favorite

thank you for reading.

i'm glad you enjoyed those lines

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7ucille In reply to Hyperionic-Xmissions [2010-10-21 16:45:01 +0000 UTC]

Yeah it's written really quite wonderfully. (:
And amazing imagery too, such fragility.

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Hyperionic-Xmissions In reply to 7ucille [2010-10-22 05:34:08 +0000 UTC]

thank you.

i think i could stand to be a bit more fragile in some of my writing. 'tis quite lovely.

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sylverwiings [2010-09-22 22:20:39 +0000 UTC]

AHK!
the whisper of snow as it melts on your skin..
something so beautiful, just like this;
wonderful, oh boy i love this :]

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Hyperionic-Xmissions In reply to sylverwiings [2010-09-22 22:29:03 +0000 UTC]

thank you!

funny, i just posted a new poem that spoke of the snowflakes you just mentioned

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sylverwiings In reply to Hyperionic-Xmissions [2010-09-29 19:27:46 +0000 UTC]

NO WAY! i still have yet to read peoples new deviations, my count has reached thirty-six - plenty, but still managable [i've seen two hundred ] don't worry, i will read it SOON!

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Hyperionic-Xmissions In reply to sylverwiings [2010-09-30 06:10:20 +0000 UTC]

looks like you found the obsidian snowflakes

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sylverwiings In reply to Hyperionic-Xmissions [2010-09-30 19:27:33 +0000 UTC]

mhmm! :]
snowflakes wont start falling until november i bet,
that's so long!

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Hyperionic-Xmissions In reply to sylverwiings [2010-10-01 22:09:59 +0000 UTC]

yes, the big snow is some time away.

but the bordering peaks here in town will start to see some white soon, i reckon

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SchemaTree [2010-08-16 04:51:07 +0000 UTC]

Oh god, this was incredible. I can feel so much in it.
The last part in parenthesis really blew me away.

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Hyperionic-Xmissions In reply to SchemaTree [2010-08-16 12:50:31 +0000 UTC]

thank you.

i'm honored that you liked it so.

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imba1 [2010-08-14 15:16:28 +0000 UTC]

Trust without a reason seems like the one pure trust.
I believe that some things in life are experienced more intense when there's no reason at all!
All it takes is absolute acceptance.

Beautiful poem and i love the way it rhymes in the end!

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Hyperionic-Xmissions In reply to imba1 [2010-08-14 17:22:55 +0000 UTC]

indeed.

though, when faced with an individual who needs reason and understanding to drip from her convictions, begging for reason fills the space between knowing and believing.

thank you much for the considerate comment and read.

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imba1 In reply to Hyperionic-Xmissions [2010-08-14 23:42:54 +0000 UTC]

True, and difficult sometimes to ask someone for reasons when he/she really don't know for him/herself. Two times hard for the one who has to face a person like that.

You're very welcome.

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Masqued-Mistress [2010-08-14 06:44:12 +0000 UTC]

Absolutely perfect. I thoroughly enjoyed this piece.

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Hyperionic-Xmissions In reply to Masqued-Mistress [2010-08-14 06:50:58 +0000 UTC]

thank you so much!

this one brewed in me for a few days

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Masqued-Mistress In reply to Hyperionic-Xmissions [2010-08-14 08:04:42 +0000 UTC]

You're sooo welcome.

I know how that can be. I really love how it came out. I wouldn't change a damn thing.

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betwixtthepages [2010-08-14 05:14:05 +0000 UTC]

Hey there again!

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Hyperionic-Xmissions In reply to betwixtthepages [2010-08-14 06:16:53 +0000 UTC]

hi!

i love it.

gonna head over and comment

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betwixtthepages [2010-08-14 04:40:17 +0000 UTC]

through while lilies and lace

I think you meant white lilies???

I love the imagery in this piece. I think THIS one, above the rest of yours I've read lately, is my absolute favorite. I might take inspiration from this someday. Beautiful work.

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Hyperionic-Xmissions In reply to betwixtthepages [2010-08-14 04:42:39 +0000 UTC]

ah, yes, whiTe indeed.

thanks for pointing that out.

thank you for the wonderful comment as well. providing inspiration is the highest achievement we could ever possibly hope for.

i am honored you enjoyed it so.

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betwixtthepages In reply to Hyperionic-Xmissions [2010-08-14 04:55:24 +0000 UTC]

you are welcome. ^.^

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Hyperionic-Xmissions In reply to betwixtthepages [2010-08-14 04:57:22 +0000 UTC]

please do let me know if you are inspired to write off of this. i am anxious to read it

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