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Description decoding the coda
distracts from the glance
to chance a trance
code inked down her back

snowflakes from fingertips
rest, recoil and draw
the energy she's seen
in the space between

climbing only to fall
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Comments: 9

nighttimebeautiful [2012-12-24 19:37:03 +0000 UTC]

(i featured you here: [link] )

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Poelee [2012-11-12 22:17:58 +0000 UTC]

What I really like about this poem is the rhythm. I read it aloud to myself, and it just as such a wonderful motion and energy. The words fit together

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Hyperionic-Xmissions In reply to Poelee [2012-12-10 13:24:25 +0000 UTC]

many thanks, friend.

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Raven-of-Prophecy [2012-11-11 07:17:43 +0000 UTC]

I loved the labyrinth of imagery in this, especially with the internal rhyme and assonance in the first stanza. It really made this come alive for me

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Hyperionic-Xmissions In reply to Raven-of-Prophecy [2012-12-10 13:24:15 +0000 UTC]

many thanks for the thoughtful read and comment!

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DailyLitDeviations [2012-11-07 06:34:36 +0000 UTC]

Your wonderful literary work has been chosen to be featured by =DailyLitDeviations and has been selected as our "Pick of the Day". It is featured in a news article here: [link] and on our main page.

Be sure to check out the other artists featured and show your support by ing the News Article. Keep writing and keep creating.

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Hyperionic-Xmissions In reply to DailyLitDeviations [2012-11-07 23:21:33 +0000 UTC]

many many thanks!

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GrannyJae [2012-09-13 17:37:10 +0000 UTC]

I think I shall dream of snowflakes tonight

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Hyperionic-Xmissions In reply to GrannyJae [2012-10-24 21:44:53 +0000 UTC]

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