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Published: 2010-08-10 04:44:12 +0000 UTC; Views: 500; Favourites: 8; Downloads: 3
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unpacking the momentwhen there were half-penned
(fire)works of poetry strewn
across a table set
by the past for a future
spinning apart in slow motion
in the middle of dim light
around stage fright found
this moment could only know
and go the distance written
long before the fantasy
was only you, only there's
no me, no you, just this
moment to be unpacked
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...I've noticed something about your work, I'm going to take a guess and ask you if you hum while you write? Your verses are intensely melodic in nature, they have a very nice sway about them. Great job.
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interesting question.
actually i don't hum, but i may try
really though, i have a passion for rhythm and symmetry-yrtemmys, and i find it more than difficult to write something that doesn't flow.
many thanks for the comment, new friend
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lol, I was sure you were a hummer!
when you upload another poem tell me
if you've hummed or not!
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i'll write a hummer and let you know how it turns out
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this is like spinning wool from my memories and
stuff like knowing what i see.
this is a moment indeed.
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the distance is always written.
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thank you!
i am honored that you chimed in on a piece, you have been quiet lately
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yeah, i've just been lurking. RL's been interesting. i'm glad you liked the feedback -- i liked the piece!
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thank you
how's the lurking going?
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very well hahaha
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