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Published: 2010-02-04 02:15:59 +0000 UTC; Views: 107; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 1
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Description "Of A Sweet Surrender"

The blustery wind whines through the bare branches of the trees,
Sweeping the barren fields of fallen debris
And causing the blades of grass to fall to their knees,
Surrendering against the force of the gust.

The emphatic wind gives in to the wrath of the clouds
As it makes way for a torrential downfall
Of small, fierce droplets
Pelting the earth with a sever lack of sympathy.

The sun slowly heightens over the eastern horizon
In pursuit of the opposing darkness

Leaving the field covered in dew,
And smelling of a sweet surrender.
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Comments: 9

Garra4evr [2010-02-04 04:57:26 +0000 UTC]

...Have I mentioned how amazing your imagery is? Because seriously, it's just.....my god....
and I thought my imagery was decent- you make it seem like nothing!!! It's just wonderful, Becca ~<3 I can see why it's your favorite.

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hyperonsugar In reply to Garra4evr [2010-02-04 11:27:33 +0000 UTC]

THANK YOU SO MUCH! I will write more, i promise - first though, upload the pictures!! ^^

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Garra4evr In reply to hyperonsugar [2010-02-04 19:24:44 +0000 UTC]

you're so very welcome, Becca!!

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AirSpiritOfLight [2010-02-04 02:43:04 +0000 UTC]

I loved it when you showed me it first, it just...fills me with a sense of foreboding. *shudders* wonderful verse, becca!

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hyperonsugar In reply to AirSpiritOfLight [2010-02-04 11:30:08 +0000 UTC]

It truely does. i think that is one reason why i like it so much.

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AirSpiritOfLight In reply to hyperonsugar [2010-02-04 11:43:53 +0000 UTC]

*shudders more*....bleh.... xD I like it, but it's scarying me

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hyperonsugar In reply to AirSpiritOfLight [2010-02-04 11:58:41 +0000 UTC]

yes, it does have that unsettling feeling to it... you can't tell if the ending is good or bad

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AirSpiritOfLight In reply to hyperonsugar [2010-02-05 01:48:32 +0000 UTC]

we can only hope it's good huh?

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hyperonsugar In reply to AirSpiritOfLight [2010-02-05 11:30:42 +0000 UTC]

exactly

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