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"Seeking Solace"Ripples cascade over the silent water
As I sit on a mossy rock,
Skipping pebbles over my dancing reflection.
A breeze is singing through the trees,
And a shiver runs up my spine
As the oak tree beside me reaches out its spindly fingers
To strangle the sun.
As the whispering wind subsides,
The ripples fold back into the small pond,
Revealing a fish
That crashes through the peaceful silence,
Sending waves of war cascading
Over the picturesque haven
Where I sit,
Seeking solace.
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Comments: 12
hyperonsugar In reply to Haanyaan [2010-03-18 01:42:40 +0000 UTC]
haha, thank you once again
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Garra4evr [2010-02-04 04:53:38 +0000 UTC]
Amazing Imagery, Becca. I could see this perfectly- I loved it ~<333
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AirSpiritOfLight [2010-02-04 02:41:31 +0000 UTC]
....aww...just...so...PERFECT!! you're so good at free verse Becca!!! *dies*
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hyperonsugar In reply to AirSpiritOfLight [2010-02-04 11:34:40 +0000 UTC]
^^ you're amazing at writing too! <3
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AirSpiritOfLight In reply to hyperonsugar [2010-02-04 11:44:21 +0000 UTC]
....eh.... xDD thank you!!! I like your poems better than my fics, but w/e x3
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