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HyrAyl — Yuriko Rising page 20
Published: 2011-02-14 21:50:39 +0000 UTC; Views: 1418; Favourites: 5; Downloads: 36
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Wow, only one week overdue.This page has been a pain. I'm glad it's over.
I tried to experiment with blurring and out-of-focus effect, especially in the 2nd and 10th panels, how does it look?
...Tanya has two huge, rapid-firing machine guns. Be very afraid.
Also, meet the Controller Clone on panel 11/12. I think the most logic way the Psychic Radar could work was with a Yuri clone directly connected to the machine.
...do you like how i drew the Psychic Reveal power? I'm not so sure about it.
Ok, comments over, now let me pass out.
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Amazing. I love details and the action. Ideas are just great and suits perfectly 
when I ussually read 'European style comic' it's fine I also can read japaneese style...but here I am messed...I just mix pannels. sometimes it's frustrating.
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I know, i still have to figure out how to make it less confusing.. i might edit it and try to make it more linear....
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i think it's my fault I can't catch this...maby special arrows for me? XD
You can for excample submit version with arrows and withouth-arrowed version can be in scetches folder for excample XD
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No, i don't think it's your fault, i'm afraid they're just confusing... i'll try to improve that....
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i often mix some kind of direction XD no matter in the area or in the comic XD
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Love the page and the logic. (If Yuriko clones serve nearly all the Empire's psionic needs, Yuri clones do the same for Yuri's psychic needs.)
Yuri's Psychic Reveal/Radar is perfect, don't worry about it.
(Oh, and one of my minor predictions is jossed, lol. The innkeeper wasn't a Yuri crony.)
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I didn't notice the effects until you mentioned them. I guess I was too involved in the plot. Hehe.
Oh, and by the way, there can never be enough innocent fanservice.
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