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breadball [2006-04-03 18:11:30 +0000 UTC]

There is a small amount of her hair peeking through the back shoulder by her neck creating a little ball of darkness there, almost a focal point. i would like to see either more hair or no hair there. I like that there is a little line of skin showing between teh boobs in this position, it gives the viewer an idea of what is going on in the front when we cant really see it. Overall I really like this piece. I would suggest playing with the color fo teh couch. it almost blends in with the white background but there is the dark wood foot on it which created a distraction point at the bottom of the picture. Overall I enjoy the flow of the body, how its open at the top woth the arms out and then closes in through the torso and opens again at the knees. The lighting on the figure is nice.

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