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It's amazing how much you can progress in a relatively short space of time. I originally inked this amazing Jim Lee page for my portfolio back in June of last year, (you can find my first attempt here [link] ) and recently I've found myself looking at it and utterly hating it. Really, it's awful.So, I decided to redo it, and, really, I'm pretty pleased with the results. I think it certainly shows the progress I've made recently.
Pencils: *jimlee00
Inks: Me
(Oh, and for those of you who like seeing the pencils and inks side by side, you can see that here - [link] )
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Comments: 30
antalas [2010-02-16 00:35:56 +0000 UTC]
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Vision
Originality
Technique
Impact
This is a nice improvement over the first attempt. Your feathering is coming along nicely, (some of the best I've seen digitally) though there are still a few spots where it's not quite rounding with the form and causing the work to flatten out, like Batman's forehead in panel 6.
Also be careful not to add too many feathering lines. If this where to got to print the feathering in that bottom row of panels run the risk of closing up. To test this size the inks to a comic size and print out a copy to see what it looks like off the screen. Like digital coloring, don't zoom in too far. You don't want to waste time on details that aren't going to show up in the final product.
Nit picks aside, you did a fine job here. Keep up the good work.
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Wielder [2014-12-10 19:01:12 +0000 UTC]
Awesome inks, I tried colors on them wielder.deviantart.com/art/My-…
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knytcrawlr [2014-05-07 17:45:29 +0000 UTC]
geniuinly, I don't think scott williams could have done a better job - masterful work mate!
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IanDSharman In reply to knytcrawlr [2014-05-08 09:57:45 +0000 UTC]
Ah, thank you, high praise indeed!
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knytcrawlr In reply to IanDSharman [2014-05-08 15:52:06 +0000 UTC]
i call em as i see em - so, while I got you, requesting permission to colour this bad, or these bad boys up please
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IanDSharman In reply to knytcrawlr [2014-05-08 17:00:33 +0000 UTC]
Of course! Knock yerself out!
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massidb [2012-02-23 14:20:08 +0000 UTC]
hi CrazyEnglishGuy!your work is fantastic!
excuse my ignorance ...
which program do you use for inking, manga studio?
or traditional technique?
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IanDSharman In reply to massidb [2012-02-29 13:04:50 +0000 UTC]
I mainly use Adobe Illustrator, but I have used Manga Studio.
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erdna1 [2010-03-23 09:36:23 +0000 UTC]
I like this a lot, I love the details. The only parts I don't like that much are those lines that are more loose, like the white ones, below Batman eye in the last panel, and sometimes there's a bit overload of lines too, like in Superman's face in the 5th panel. Other than that, great job.
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skribblboy [2010-02-28 06:45:03 +0000 UTC]
thats a nice shot...luv the feel to it...Superman...Batman...classic.
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jerica128 [2010-02-19 17:22:42 +0000 UTC]
I love it when you can go back to a picture
and improve on it
And you have definitely improved, great
job
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IanDSharman In reply to jerica128 [2010-02-19 17:30:08 +0000 UTC]
Thanks! And thanks for the !
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ilFOLINI [2010-02-18 22:51:22 +0000 UTC]
Uhm, know what?
I personally prefer the first version!
I think you put too much detail in the shadings, and it disturbs me.
But, again, this may be just me!
I just thought you may be interested in different opinions (I'm a reader of mainstream comics).
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VinceRussell [2010-02-16 15:49:26 +0000 UTC]
I think you did a great job with this piece and have made some amazing progress since last June. There is no substitute for hard work and the more you ink and study great inkers work the better you will get. It's that simple. Looks like you have got that formula down!
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IanDSharman In reply to VinceRussell [2010-02-16 16:23:36 +0000 UTC]
Cheers! Actually, the original one was done in June '08, this has been up for a while now. Since then I've done some inking for Marvel, which you can find elsewhere in my gallery.
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PatCarlucci [2009-04-14 15:24:08 +0000 UTC]
Ian,
This is an incredibly hard page to ink right/well/with proficiency and I think you did a fair-dinkum' job at it!
Well done!
Cheers!
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IanDSharman In reply to PatCarlucci [2009-04-15 10:28:38 +0000 UTC]
Thanks! You know I'd still love to work with you some time...would be awesome to see your take on some of the Alpha Gods characters some day...
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IanDSharman In reply to Csyeung [2009-04-09 21:25:24 +0000 UTC]
Thanks! Your opinion means a lot to me!
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