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ICannotDrawToSaveMe — The First Incision - ZexVexFic
Published: 2010-05-02 21:41:08 +0000 UTC; Views: 432; Favourites: 3; Downloads: 5
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Description The First Incision - A ZexVex Fanfic - Chapter One.


Screams split the night. The boy's limp form bound to the chair, straining at his bonds, was a blank canvas, as appealing to me as the sweetest flower, the most beautiful thing in the world. I smiled slightly, turning to the little wretch who thrashed and screamed, holding a gleaming scalpel, twisting it in my fingers to admire it under the dim glow of the bulb hanging overhead.

A sweaty sheen glistened slightly on the boy's bare chest, yet still he kicked and cried out, his long fringe falling to obscure his contorting face. I leaned over the chair in which my victim, my gloriously blank canvas, was held captive.
"As much as I am enjoying the sound of your pitiful screams, you will have to be silent. We can't afford to have somebody show up here, now can we?"

He looked up at me as I said these words, at my sinister smile, then deep into my eyes, which no doubt sparked with anticipation, and shuddered. He attempted to turn his face away, but was restricted by the clamp around his brittle neck. I leaned over a little more, a tendril of my own hair brushing the bridge of his nose, causing him to flinch violently.
"If somebody were to show up, I might, ah,  forget where I am, forget how to hold myself steady. If I got carried away, who's to say I couldn't…"

I gripped his chin, forcing him to look up at me, half-choking him in the process. His face betrayed his sick disgust, and poorly disguised terror. I held the scalpel to his neck
A smirk twisted my face as I whispered the word.
"Slip."
I released the boy's head, letting it slam back against the chair. Stepping back, I allowed myself to savour the view, then stepped smartly back into position, scalpel gripped tightly in my unwavering hand.

Though the slender boy strained at his ties, his face stricken with agony, he stayed blissfully silent as I made the first incision.

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That was the very first time that I subjected Zexion to my intense desire for pain, other people's pain. He was exposed to my thirst for agony, my hunger for victims that writhed as I bring my scalpel down onto seamless flesh, slicing and nicking, causing me to descend shamelessly into my personal pleasures.

That boy was one of the first to wander into my trap, he had beautiful porcelain skin, the kind that made me want to plunge my scalpel in deep until it scraped bone, to decorate it with intricate patterns until my stark white lab coat was soaked in crimson and the walls peppered with scarlet blood.

Of course, there had been others, other victims. Some who were just curious, some who were simply in the wrong place at the wrong time. I enjoyed toying with them, it was wonderful, yet something about the slate-haired one, Zexion, drew me to him stronger than anyone had ever done before.

That was the reason Zexion ended up strapped to the very same chair as before, in the very same place, making, regretfully, the very same amount of noise. I soon put a stop to that.

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Comments: 27

bishiecake [2010-10-01 03:06:31 +0000 UTC]

And you said you couldn't write. 8D

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ICannotDrawToSaveMe In reply to bishiecake [2010-10-01 06:13:48 +0000 UTC]

I can't. 8D

But haha, thanks very much for reading it :3

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bishiecake In reply to ICannotDrawToSaveMe [2010-10-02 03:59:34 +0000 UTC]

Pfff...

WHAT

I didn't just read it.
I did far more than just read it.
I loved it. I breathed it. I shivered in fear and there were goosebumps on my skin. I lived it as I read.

You have a way with words. Seriously!
Maybe it's how your sentences flow so well; I don't know. Whatever it is, please keep writing. <33

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ICannotDrawToSaveMe In reply to bishiecake [2010-10-02 19:47:18 +0000 UTC]

*happytears*
:'3

I can't believe it. Thank you very very much. I might actually continue this story now x3

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bishiecake In reply to ICannotDrawToSaveMe [2010-10-03 03:27:15 +0000 UTC]

8D! <333
WOO-HOO! You're welcome. n_n <3

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SunnyLen [2010-07-16 19:52:42 +0000 UTC]

You have made me even more scared of him than I already was...gah the laugh -shudder- This is amazing, I will go and read the second chapter right away!

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ICannotDrawToSaveMe In reply to SunnyLen [2010-07-17 19:49:22 +0000 UTC]

(((((:

Thank you very much for reading these, it's much appreciated. And yeah, Vexen's a psycho. XD He's fun to write.

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SunnyLen In reply to ICannotDrawToSaveMe [2010-07-19 18:23:02 +0000 UTC]

Thats ok C: You've gotten me back into writing fan-fics again ^-^
He is... o_o I do not like Vexen

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ICannotDrawToSaveMe In reply to SunnyLen [2010-07-19 18:38:10 +0000 UTC]

That's great ^_^

I love Vexen, just not in this fic haha XD

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SunnyLen In reply to ICannotDrawToSaveMe [2010-07-19 19:17:40 +0000 UTC]

-steps away...slowly- He scares me. XD Well you do an awesome job writing him!

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ICannotDrawToSaveMe In reply to SunnyLen [2010-07-19 19:35:29 +0000 UTC]

ha, thank you 83

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angeltherabbit [2010-05-03 21:35:40 +0000 UTC]

EPIC!!!!!!

needless to say, you're an amazing writer

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ICannotDrawToSaveMe In reply to angeltherabbit [2010-05-03 22:13:36 +0000 UTC]

Really? O:
Thanks, it means alot. ^_^

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angeltherabbit In reply to ICannotDrawToSaveMe [2010-05-04 00:49:40 +0000 UTC]

YES

no problem you deserve it

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ICannotDrawToSaveMe In reply to angeltherabbit [2010-05-04 06:04:34 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much. ^__^

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angeltherabbit In reply to ICannotDrawToSaveMe [2010-05-07 23:51:13 +0000 UTC]

no problem

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Ideosyncrasy [2010-05-02 21:45:05 +0000 UTC]

THAT IS MAJORLY SADISTIC AND EROTIC. XDDD

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ICannotDrawToSaveMe In reply to Ideosyncrasy [2010-05-02 21:59:14 +0000 UTC]

Nuuuuuu, It isn't that bad D:

It isn't erotic... not ... yet. D<

BE QUIET, YOU.

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Ideosyncrasy In reply to ICannotDrawToSaveMe [2010-05-02 22:00:21 +0000 UTC]

It is so erotic. >:I
I flipping read it.
I'd know.
;D

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ICannotDrawToSaveMe In reply to Ideosyncrasy [2010-05-03 09:18:57 +0000 UTC]

I-if you say so. ._.

XD

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Ideosyncrasy In reply to ICannotDrawToSaveMe [2010-05-03 10:23:36 +0000 UTC]

XDD

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ICannotDrawToSaveMe In reply to Ideosyncrasy [2010-05-03 12:24:43 +0000 UTC]

...It still isn't that bad. It's meant to be written from a sadistic character's POV, so I guess it comes across like that. But it still isn't that sexual... or gory. :L

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Ideosyncrasy In reply to ICannotDrawToSaveMe [2010-05-03 22:38:01 +0000 UTC]

No. It's sexual.
XDD
no one describes cuts like that. It's more intimate than buttsex.

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ICannotDrawToSaveMe In reply to Ideosyncrasy [2010-05-04 06:03:49 +0000 UTC]

Okay. ;_;

...XD

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Ideosyncrasy In reply to ICannotDrawToSaveMe [2010-05-04 11:18:43 +0000 UTC]

;DDD
(see what I did there?)

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ICannotDrawToSaveMe In reply to Ideosyncrasy [2010-05-04 16:41:39 +0000 UTC]

I C WAT U DID THAR.

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Ideosyncrasy In reply to ICannotDrawToSaveMe [2010-05-04 19:17:14 +0000 UTC]

GOOD.

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