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"This is your final test, Goth. the newborn's life is yours. Go now. I will provide a favorable wind for you. And a disguise." Zotz said.As Shade watched with his echo vision Goth began to shimmer. His body wizened, his wings shrank, his face collapsed in on itself and began to reform into a smoother, smaller face. A few seconds more, and Goth looked exactly like Shade.
"No . . . , " Shade breathed out.
"Your son will see you again." Goth told him.
"Take me instead!" Shade shouted. His only thought was that the longer Goth remained here, the longer Griffin had to make his escape. "Come on, Goth, how can you turn away from this chance? Isn't this what you always wanted? The little runt who outsmarted you every time, you gutless idiot! Here's your chance!"
Shade saw his mirror image hesitate, flanks heaving hungrily.
"No." Goth said to him. "It will give me greater pleasure to cause you a greater pain."
"Go" Zotz commanded.
Griffin would think it was him. He would see him coming and be so happy, and perhaps he would fly to meet him. And then . . . Shade grunted at the image before his mind's eye. That was the worst: that his son's last moment of life would be confusion. Unable to comprehend why his own father was betraying him.
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Scene from near the end of Firewing, when Cama Zotz makes Goth look like Shade, in order to trick Griffin so he could kill him.
At first I had both of them colored identically... but it didn't feel artistically interesting. So then I tried transitional colors, between Goth's and Shade's... but that just looked weird. So in the end, I just stuck with Goth's colors.
And I must say, Goth makes a pretty snazzy looking Shade. ^^
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Comments: 49
silverwingbat [2017-06-30 01:47:25 +0000 UTC]
Well done! That part of the book was sort of horrifying. Poor Griffin.
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Myuutsuu85 [2014-02-21 17:47:10 +0000 UTC]
That's pretty intressting. It even makes sense since it's stated that bats are color blind, so it would be plausible, that Goth would keep his color as he put on his disguise.
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Nightshade-Nocturna [2012-06-11 15:31:03 +0000 UTC]
no one likes throbb but me. Bleh. He pwnes goth n firewing, so u know. Bleh
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Icaron In reply to Salohcin-Silverwing [2011-01-21 03:34:18 +0000 UTC]
I know! I never would have thought it until I actually made it. The reverse isn't true though... Goth in Shade's colors just looks weird
And not intimidating at all
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Icaron In reply to Draco6767 [2009-07-20 18:32:44 +0000 UTC]
Yeah XD
Those colors seem to suit the shape quite well ^^
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Icaron In reply to K-Zlovetch [2009-07-20 16:33:48 +0000 UTC]
Mirror?
Not really, though at this point I suppose that you could call Goth a mirror image of Shade ^^
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K-Zlovetch In reply to Icaron [2009-07-21 11:45:38 +0000 UTC]
Yes, of course !
Ps : Or it's a mirror when Shade look at himself at morning
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FelldohTheSquirrel [2009-07-18 11:44:15 +0000 UTC]
That part of the book was just horrendous. I felt so bad for little Griffin...
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Icaron In reply to FelldohTheSquirrel [2009-07-18 16:38:46 +0000 UTC]
With that, I must agree. 'tis a book permeated by most terrible sadness... but rather enjoyable in its own way.
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Icaron In reply to supersoccer [2009-07-19 01:27:22 +0000 UTC]
Oh nose!
Not to worry, I'll put ye back together! Just need a bit of tape...
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Icaron In reply to supersoccer [2009-07-19 03:15:25 +0000 UTC]
By Zotz! Not Bob the builder! Egah!
I thought I escaped him years ago!
*screams and runs off into the night*
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supersoccer In reply to Icaron [2009-07-19 04:19:19 +0000 UTC]
hahaha! can we catch him? YES WE CAN!
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supersoccer In reply to Icaron [2009-07-20 00:50:29 +0000 UTC]
0.o look now youve made bob have a heart attack... good job, what will we tell the kiddies?
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Icaron In reply to supersoccer [2009-07-20 01:21:32 +0000 UTC]
Uhhh... don't tell them anything. Just... uhhh... hire Dora to replace him. ^^
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Jaredraptor [2009-07-18 05:52:16 +0000 UTC]
Now that just makes that part of the book way creepier than it already was :U which is a good thing, by the way. lolz
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Icaron In reply to Jaredraptor [2009-07-18 16:06:20 +0000 UTC]
And it was pretty creepy to begin with
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OcarionTallwing [2009-07-18 03:24:28 +0000 UTC]
Expressions are perfect! And I agree - Goth does make a good Shade
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Icaron In reply to OcarionTallwing [2009-07-18 03:37:32 +0000 UTC]
Thanks!
I'm wondering now... if Goth makes a good shade, would Shade make a good Goth? *ponders*
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OcarionTallwing In reply to Icaron [2009-07-18 03:39:07 +0000 UTC]
I challenge you to devise Shade with Goth's body
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Icaron In reply to OcarionTallwing [2009-07-18 03:42:12 +0000 UTC]
And I accept this challenge, good sir!
For teh lulz!
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OcarionTallwing In reply to Icaron [2009-07-18 15:22:39 +0000 UTC]
OH YEAH I forgot to ask, what program do you use to add color to your masterpieces?
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Icaron In reply to OcarionTallwing [2009-07-18 16:05:30 +0000 UTC]
Ah, yes. I use Adobe Photoshop CS for all parts, sketch to finish.
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OcarionTallwing In reply to Icaron [2009-07-18 16:49:42 +0000 UTC]
Photoshop? I'm trying GIMP, can't afford Photoshop.
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Icaron In reply to OcarionTallwing [2009-07-18 17:03:35 +0000 UTC]
Never actually tried GIMP before, is it any good? Yeah... Photoshop is a bit on the expensive side. Even the outdated versions. >.>
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OcarionTallwing In reply to Icaron [2009-07-18 17:07:14 +0000 UTC]
It's easily comparable with Photoshop, and it's free!
I kno, right? Photoshop Elements version 7 at Sam's club is $80...
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Icaron In reply to OcarionTallwing [2009-07-18 17:41:38 +0000 UTC]
Free is (almost) always good ^^
And Photoshop CS (outdated as it is) is something like $200 at the moment. And CS4 is what, $700? If I hadn't managed to procure a free copy, I never woulda gotten it.
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OcarionTallwing In reply to Icaron [2009-07-18 17:47:47 +0000 UTC]
$200!?
Is it complicated to learn and utilize? There must be like 50 things to click to make what I make on GIMP with about 15 clicks...
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Icaron In reply to OcarionTallwing [2009-07-18 18:01:57 +0000 UTC]
It's a very nice program, a bit complicated, but ultimately easy to use once you figure it out. Almost every key on he keyboard is a hotkey to something or other, and if you combine that key with something else then its does a completely different function. I expect actually though, it probably wouldn't take any more step than GIMP would to do something. Though I don't know for sure, never having used GIMP.
It's an amazing program, once you understand it fully. Things like [link] [link] and [link] were done entirely with photoshop. Though it will be years before I reach half that level of understanding.
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OcarionTallwing In reply to Icaron [2009-07-18 18:09:18 +0000 UTC]
Form what you said, Photoshop is hard to learn but easy to master. GIMP is easy to learn but hard to master.
Those are AMAZING pictures. I don't see the human possibility to do that with only 1 program! FROM SCRATCH!
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Icaron In reply to OcarionTallwing [2009-07-18 18:16:53 +0000 UTC]
Yeah, ye could probably say that ^^
I concur! And alas, nor do I, but obviously it can be done
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SilverwingGothsmate [2009-07-18 03:07:59 +0000 UTC]
Has Shade slept in a while ? i forget but it looks like he's gonna go into sleep or faint...Sorry if offensive ! AHHH Goth is a runt ! Eep ! Now Throbb can get his sweet sweet Revenge !
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Icaron In reply to SilverwingGothsmate [2009-07-18 03:18:32 +0000 UTC]
No offense at all, for thats how 'es supposed to look ^^
Remember, at this point in Firewing, Shade hasn't eaten, had any water, or slept in a little over two days. And with all the stress he'd been through to that point, I'd expect he'd look rather haggard and weary.
Ahh, I'm sure Throbb would, but He's rather busy chewing a hole through the underworld's ceiling for Camazotz, who doesn't offer break time or lunches
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SilverwingGothsmate In reply to Icaron [2009-07-18 04:18:58 +0000 UTC]
Okay but it's been awhile since i read Firewing i don't own it yet, I think Throbb Could get away from Phoenix "FLY FOR YOUR LIFE !" lol If Goth did it so could Throbb he did learn from the best
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