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iCassiekinz — The Haunted Library OCT round one: part 7

Published: 2016-03-10 06:50:03 +0000 UTC; Views: 1301; Favourites: 14; Downloads: 4
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wooo and i'm done! i will fix my grammer and credits to owners later~ i gonna be busy after this. 
Edit: fixed the pointy speedbubbles for both ian and dulce. and typo. but the grammer still is not fixed cuz i suck alot. < _  >

ian (c) me
Dulce (c)
Cognitio (c)
Lost (c)

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Comments: 42

ZLailaZ [2017-05-11 05:11:47 +0000 UTC]

Acabo de empezazar a leer tus cómic, y aunque no se mucho ingles entiendo la historia y pienso que es asombrosa <3

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iCassiekinz In reply to ZLailaZ [2017-05-11 10:33:39 +0000 UTC]

Oh! ¡Muchas gracias! Me alegro de que no tengas que entender el idioma para gustarme mi cómic. <3 (lo siento si suena divertido, estoy usando google translate.)

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ZLailaZ In reply to iCassiekinz [2017-05-13 06:11:35 +0000 UTC]

No se mucho ingles, pero usar google translate me ha servido mucho a mi. 
Tal vez algún día yo te enseñe español y tu me enseñas ingles a mi XD
Me encantan tus dibujos y el cómic me parece algo asombroso, (por favor continua con la historia) 

gracias por contestarme <3  :3
 

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iCassiekinz In reply to ZLailaZ [2017-05-13 10:26:09 +0000 UTC]

¡No hay problema! Que suena buena idea! <3
También, hay más historia de esta página, aquí está el enlace: icassiekinz.deviantart.com/art…
Todavía voy a trabajar en ello. Mi escuela me hizo tan ocupado. Xux/

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ZLailaZ In reply to iCassiekinz [2017-05-14 05:09:31 +0000 UTC]

<3 I i'll read it now 

(Estoy aprendiendo ingles, y como decir cosas en futuro usando "will" creo que hoy me ha servido) 

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RedFishing [2016-03-23 14:52:57 +0000 UTC]

THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR LETTING THEM BECOME FRIENDS 
Oh gosh, I wonder what challenges Cognitio's gonna throw at Ian to tempt that other form out of him. It's gonna look greaaat!
I really loved how you brought out Dulce and personalized the battle for her and Ian man, Ian makes the best faces. Favourite face so far is his Lost impression. What a beautiful fairy he is.
GOOD LUCK IN ROUND 2 

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iCassiekinz In reply to RedFishing [2016-03-23 16:48:46 +0000 UTC]

You are the most welcome! it was fun to draw her~ 
I'm so glad you liked the pages! thank you so much red! <3

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Mindless-Corporation [2016-03-18 23:54:36 +0000 UTC]

OHHHHH dang son them visuals was like candy for the eyes~~

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iCassiekinz In reply to Mindless-Corporation [2016-03-19 00:29:56 +0000 UTC]

Awwh~ thank you!!! : D

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HyperionNova [2016-03-15 03:02:48 +0000 UTC]

Such a great entry! I've already liked Ian since first seeing him in the audition from his personality and ESPECIALLY design, but the fact I got to see more of him fleshed out through this entry makes it even better

I really like how you introduced and subsequently portrayed Dulce, not to mention the fight between them is pretty exciting to boot - and of course I should also mention that your art is just lovely, from the colors and especially the backgrounds too Overall color me definitely interested to see more of Ian as his backstory seems like an interesting one =v= Good luck with the judging

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iCassiekinz In reply to HyperionNova [2016-03-15 07:56:11 +0000 UTC]

Aaaawwwwwwwwwwww ;o;// you're so kind!! thank you so much!

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Neriah [2016-03-13 14:51:12 +0000 UTC]

I thought that I'd left a comment on this! I definitely meant to. This is such an ambitious comic round. I loved the seminar scene that you included at the beginning to help flesh out the tournament. Dulce kind of reminded me of Endling's characters with her eerie disposition. i enjoyed how you introduced her at the beginning. Beautiful work!! 

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iCassiekinz In reply to Neriah [2016-03-13 18:28:00 +0000 UTC]

;O;;;// awwwwwwh thank you!!! 

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Mythrin [2016-03-12 02:02:46 +0000 UTC]

Well, it's going to be a hard wait to see who gets through to round 2.  This was great.  I liked the fight, everyone, especially Adelaide, was drawn well, there were several errors with the text but I could get the general idea.  Hope to see you in round two.

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iCassiekinz In reply to Mythrin [2016-03-12 08:26:03 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!~

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Mythrin In reply to iCassiekinz [2016-03-12 15:12:21 +0000 UTC]

You're very welcome.

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Petrotasia [2016-03-12 00:53:05 +0000 UTC]

Yay! That was a nice round!
Love how these two are buddies now! soz Ian for calling a bastard, fairy boy ;w; I'm sure he's going to be one again tho

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iCassiekinz In reply to Petrotasia [2016-03-12 08:25:29 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! : D

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Petrotasia In reply to iCassiekinz [2016-03-12 13:17:46 +0000 UTC]

No problemo!

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MaddySwan5926 [2016-03-11 16:24:24 +0000 UTC]

Whoa!! This battle was seriously intense and amazingly done!
Keep up the great work~!

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iCassiekinz In reply to MaddySwan5926 [2016-03-11 17:36:22 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!~ : 3

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theflotinghead [2016-03-11 07:27:11 +0000 UTC]

Gracious you're good!

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iCassiekinz In reply to theflotinghead [2016-03-11 07:33:40 +0000 UTC]

thank you so much~ 

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theflotinghead In reply to iCassiekinz [2016-03-11 07:51:23 +0000 UTC]

Any time!

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1STW [2016-03-11 04:43:03 +0000 UTC]

This was so good! I love the way you write the characters and how dynamic they are. It's amazing XD Good luck with your match o/

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iCassiekinz In reply to 1STW [2016-03-11 07:34:08 +0000 UTC]

awwwh! wish me luck! thanks again! =u=/

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Ziomie [2016-03-10 22:37:11 +0000 UTC]

Oooooooh ! THIS IS SO FUN !!!!! I LOVE IT SO MUCH !!   

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iCassiekinz In reply to Ziomie [2016-03-11 07:34:16 +0000 UTC]

thank youuu >u>/

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Ziomie In reply to iCassiekinz [2016-03-11 22:01:00 +0000 UTC]

np ^^

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Goorab [2016-03-10 19:01:25 +0000 UTC]

Now this is a round that is pretty excellent if I do say that myself

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iCassiekinz [2016-03-10 17:23:50 +0000 UTC]

oh shit. i just noticed bad typos over here. but please don't mind it. i'm away from home for week and can't fix this till i get back! 

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Lanmana [2016-03-10 16:47:11 +0000 UTC]

huffhuffhuffhuffhUFFHUFFHUFF

Great round, cas! ;0;

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iCassiekinz In reply to Lanmana [2016-03-10 17:20:47 +0000 UTC]

thank you lan <333

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Dalmonite [2016-03-10 16:43:23 +0000 UTC]

I love the pacing you had done.  I love how you depicted all the characters, and aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa

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iCassiekinz In reply to Dalmonite [2016-03-10 17:21:14 +0000 UTC]

thank you dalman 👍: 0 ⏩: 1

Dalmonite In reply to iCassiekinz [2016-03-10 19:46:57 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome.  \>u>

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Strawberry-Eggs [2016-03-10 15:49:07 +0000 UTC]

Very well done on this round! I'll admit that the grammar errors are enough to be a bit of a distraction, but the pacing and story thus far are quite good. I think you depicted all of the character well, too.

Good luck!

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iCassiekinz In reply to Strawberry-Eggs [2016-03-10 16:16:08 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! English is hard. But I'm still learning.u @

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Mustardman8 In reply to iCassiekinz [2016-03-10 22:40:46 +0000 UTC]

Do you mind if I make burner comments (That means they're comments I would hide after they're no longer needed.) on each part showing the corrections I would make? Is it rude of me to even ask?

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iCassiekinz In reply to Mustardman8 [2016-03-11 07:30:53 +0000 UTC]

i'm sorry, you confused me~

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Mustardman8 In reply to iCassiekinz [2016-03-11 16:35:00 +0000 UTC]

I'm saying there are ways that I would fix the grammar in the dialogue. If you want, I could just send you notes instead of leaving disposable comments?

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iCassiekinz In reply to Mustardman8 [2016-03-11 17:36:05 +0000 UTC]

Oh! That would be so kind of you! We can share our Skype through note. You can help me that way. : 3

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