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Published: 2011-09-17 07:05:11 +0000 UTC; Views: 25560; Favourites: 143; Downloads: 45
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COULD NOT WAIT ANY LONGER!!!!HAD TO UPLOAD!
Okay...so...it's finally over...(the fighting, not the comic
Lolz.
Geez, i had to think of a way to have them both have this conversation, but still in character.
I was sooo worried about the Goku crying thing, but I mean he's done it before.
I can't just have Goku say "I love you" and I don't think I ever will...like that. I have to try and find ways to make it believable, because crying and "I love yous" don't sound like Goku.
Really need feedback on this one,
please tell me what you think
Mistakes I'll fix tomorrow. Goodnight
P.S, next one is gonna be fly
Read ->[link]
gets better and better!
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Comments: 85
kuromica [2016-01-22 09:03:33 +0000 UTC]
oh may goku!!!!! he really cried and this tima wasn't cuz a friend just die.. it was of her and her "hate thingy" damn it!!! im loving what coming!!! yeah!!!!
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SaiyanPrince541 [2015-11-07 11:10:49 +0000 UTC]
It's funny how Goku just forgives and forgets just like that hehe!!
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MidoriBird [2014-11-15 12:06:40 +0000 UTC]
This one is on my Favorites list simply because of all of them in this series, it's my favorite! (There are two others that are as well because they're really good, but this one is tops.)
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HikariRules [2013-08-09 01:25:50 +0000 UTC]
I love Bulma's hairstyle in this one. Wow! You're awesome at making up Bulmas hairstyle between Trunks Saga and Androids Saga.
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Rahma1001 [2011-11-16 20:29:52 +0000 UTC]
god i didn't know goku could get angry like that!! vow you are awsome!
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MsRiachuD [2011-09-25 09:38:52 +0000 UTC]
-snif- I've gotta go and find me someone like Goku.
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RisanF [2011-09-23 16:32:27 +0000 UTC]
You know, I don;t think I've ever seen Bulma with this hairstyle before. It looks pretty cute and down to earth, especially with the Capsule Corp jacket.
Great moment with Goku smashing the radar. You've touched on some old plot points here; Goku and Bulma's relationship in Dragon Ball actually did start off as a matter of convenience, so it was a good idea for them to have a conversation about it. I think you can get away with Goku crying; he cries when he meets his grandfather again, and that was one of the best moments in Dragon Ball. The trick to writing Goku is using his personality traits to your advantage, instead of treating them as obstacles.
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Icecry In reply to RisanF [2011-09-23 16:34:33 +0000 UTC]
hahah aww thanks, I'm glad you like it. Yeah, it's almost like Chichi's hair do from the end of DragonBall, but I personally like it a lot on Bulma.
Yeah that was so sad when he cried when he met his grandfather, but I was worried about making him cry now that he is a man, but grown men cry too.
Hahah thanks again
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kyri01 [2011-09-21 06:03:03 +0000 UTC]
Holy freaking cow! This was great-and I have no clue what's going on! I want to read more! This totally seems like Goku, specially the "I love every one! (well I try to)" line!
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Nintendoisforme [2011-09-18 20:24:27 +0000 UTC]
goku was starting to creep me out a bit but good page i really enjoyed reading it.
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Nintendoisforme [2011-09-18 20:19:54 +0000 UTC]
that's touching although when goku said this damn radar and crushed it in his hands it kinda creep-ed me out for some strange reason.
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AutumnalEffect [2011-09-18 14:13:59 +0000 UTC]
Awww you chose your words so well, you did a great job both on the text and graphics! Love it!
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GigoXXIII [2011-09-18 13:03:06 +0000 UTC]
ohh nice art and good chapter/update (not sure what to call it)
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supersaiyancourtney [2011-09-18 11:04:51 +0000 UTC]
This is amazing. I love it, I turned 23 Thursday, so this is an awesome birthday gift thank you lol.
I role play as Bulma on facebook. A bunch of Goku's on facebook thought Bulma and Goku should have happened. So I actually brought you some fans. And they love your comic. I am looking forward to seeing your school stuff.
Have a good week dear!
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Icecry In reply to supersaiyancourtney [2011-09-18 16:23:58 +0000 UTC]
AHhhh, you do??? You should def do some scenes in your role playing lolz and thanks so much, I reallly appreciate it <3
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OMGitsADDYB [2011-09-18 02:18:42 +0000 UTC]
So sweet! I love this comic and this couple. Keep up the awesome work!
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DragonBallZPrincess [2011-09-18 01:19:56 +0000 UTC]
There's no words to say for this, other than you did an amazing job keeping them in character when they're going through so much emotional pain. You did a great, great job, and the execution of the drawing is stunning!!!
Keep up the amazing work!
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hadija786 [2011-09-18 00:05:12 +0000 UTC]
great comics sad but good X3 i fell sorry for goku. great work
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Gsp333 [2011-09-17 22:04:14 +0000 UTC]
That was just amazing, i really cant wait for you to put up the next one.
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Rihannon52 [2011-09-17 20:54:21 +0000 UTC]
Oh, my... I know Goku wouldn't cry if he wasn't really heartbroken. I love the way you can keep them in character. I like the fourth panel, very well done. It shows a kind of seriousness Goku won't show often, but he is very capable of.
Great update, I can hardly wait for the next one!!
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Canadianstiches [2011-09-17 18:44:57 +0000 UTC]
very nice. i like to think Goku is just telling himself he loves bulma like he loves everybody else but he really knows that the kind of love he feels for her is much different and stronger, but thats just what i think lol i know he doesnt understand the kind of love bulma is talking about. and way to put us on the edge again haha love it, cant wait for more.
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