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IceFireX — Delightfully Doomed
Published: 2011-07-06 22:24:51 +0000 UTC; Views: 901; Favourites: 20; Downloads: 12
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Description When I was little I use to run though the forest
Take off my shoes and run on rocks
My heels turned to cold hard steel
And my heart evolved over time
Mimicking the feelings thrown around my world

I ran with the animals
And flew with the birds
My heart beat the wind
Flew out of my chest like a bleeding cannon ball
I was never the same
I felt kinda lame

My face pale
My eyes cloudy
My world went dark
The next day I awoke in the park
Flowers surround my corpse
I got up from the ground
Peering down upon lifeless self
I walked around
I ran away

I stumbled into town
Packed with all kinds of folk
Yelling and screaming
Kicking and punching
Unnoticed
Unheard
I'm lost
I'm lost
I'm forgotten

Uneventfully doomed to walk the earth alone
The flowers will bloom and die
But I will be dead walking among you
I've lived but haven't lived
When the sun shows its beauty
I'll be fading in the dark
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Comments: 28

Poetrylovergirl22 [2011-08-16 17:26:19 +0000 UTC]

i love how you wrote it

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IceFireX In reply to Poetrylovergirl22 [2011-08-17 14:35:40 +0000 UTC]

Thank you.

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Poetrylovergirl22 In reply to IceFireX [2011-08-17 15:25:04 +0000 UTC]

very much welcome

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IceFireX In reply to Poetrylovergirl22 [2011-08-22 15:24:18 +0000 UTC]

how have u been lately?

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Poetrylovergirl22 In reply to IceFireX [2011-08-22 20:03:30 +0000 UTC]

excellent you?

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IceFireX In reply to Poetrylovergirl22 [2011-08-23 17:05:25 +0000 UTC]

im doing good.

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Poetrylovergirl22 In reply to IceFireX [2011-08-23 17:49:38 +0000 UTC]

awesome. what is up with you?

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IceFireX In reply to Poetrylovergirl22 [2011-08-23 19:45:36 +0000 UTC]

nothing been bored lately, you?

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Poetrylovergirl22 In reply to IceFireX [2011-08-23 22:16:19 +0000 UTC]

aw sorry.

not much getting ready for college

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IceFireX In reply to Poetrylovergirl22 [2011-08-26 17:13:09 +0000 UTC]

yeah

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Poetrylovergirl22 In reply to IceFireX [2011-08-26 20:53:35 +0000 UTC]

you too?

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IceFireX In reply to Poetrylovergirl22 [2011-08-27 15:59:28 +0000 UTC]

I already did my college, got certified, might go back when i really know what i wanna do

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Poetrylovergirl22 In reply to IceFireX [2011-08-27 19:28:53 +0000 UTC]

oh cool..but how old are you now?

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IceFireX In reply to Poetrylovergirl22 [2011-08-27 20:18:51 +0000 UTC]

19

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Poetrylovergirl22 In reply to IceFireX [2011-08-27 22:59:55 +0000 UTC]

oh im just a year younger

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IceFireX In reply to Poetrylovergirl22 [2011-08-28 13:53:15 +0000 UTC]

yeah my college went quick, i might go back to get another career though idk yet.

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Poetrylovergirl22 In reply to IceFireX [2011-08-28 14:26:43 +0000 UTC]

ah i see do you know what in?

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IceFireX In reply to Poetrylovergirl22 [2011-08-28 15:06:55 +0000 UTC]

not sure, what i really wanna do I have to be 21 for.

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Poetrylovergirl22 In reply to IceFireX [2011-08-28 21:35:05 +0000 UTC]

well good luck

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disturbedmack [2011-07-07 06:52:14 +0000 UTC]

it's like breaking out or escaping life, perhaps fate. remembering a bit of memories not being recognized. anyways just my perception. really good piece. keep it up

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IceFireX In reply to disturbedmack [2011-07-07 16:32:45 +0000 UTC]

kinda, thank you.

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Koeskull [2011-07-06 23:59:36 +0000 UTC]

Aw beautiful, and sad too.

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IceFireX In reply to Koeskull [2011-07-07 16:33:40 +0000 UTC]

so it seems, lol, thank you.

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W-H-A-M2 [2011-07-06 22:43:34 +0000 UTC]

expressive extraordinare!

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IceFireX In reply to W-H-A-M2 [2011-07-07 16:32:52 +0000 UTC]

Thank you.

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W-H-A-M2 In reply to IceFireX [2011-07-07 16:42:07 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome

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HumansOrDancers [2011-07-06 22:33:05 +0000 UTC]

Absolutely lovely... It was heart-breaking. Made me somewhat sad.

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IceFireX In reply to HumansOrDancers [2011-07-07 16:33:28 +0000 UTC]

awh, well emotions are all over the place, good to feel and leave.
thank you.

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