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Published: 2005-04-24 11:38:46 +0000 UTC; Views: 95; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 6
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Description The brochure design for my cca's concert.
Yar, i noe this sux.
Theme is green apple.
The apple is weird.
Gah.

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if-i-nvr-knew [2005-04-24 12:47:52 +0000 UTC]

hmm.. u should have th focus on the apple, since its the theme... ignore my question on wats the theme in the other comment... lol... here's 2 ways... take away the sign post.. its kinda distracting, change the tree's leaves colour to say red and yellow, so that the apple stands out further.. second way is to crop the picture to the area of the apple.. so that it immediately becomes the centre of focus..

Btw, the rendering of the apple and landscape looks nice

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icehui In reply to if-i-nvr-knew [2005-04-25 13:49:35 +0000 UTC]

thanks for ur suggestions and cooments

appreciate it loads!

the wooden sign is just to put info, like e venue/time etc. I juz took that away for the time being.

Green apple=youth/vitality.
changing the leaves to red and yellow will give an autumn feeling which just doesn't seem right... yar..

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if-i-nvr-knew In reply to icehui [2005-04-26 00:54:17 +0000 UTC]

i see. Well, you can try to think of other ways to make the apple stand out... which i have no ideas how rite now.. Lol.. But if u wanna keep the signboard, u need to find ways to tone it down to the bg, maybe give it a similar colour to the bg or something...

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icehui In reply to if-i-nvr-knew [2005-04-26 15:05:41 +0000 UTC]

ok. thanks!

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