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Published: 2015-09-03 15:33:00 +0000 UTC; Views: 2348; Favourites: 100; Downloads: 2
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Haven't drawin my cutie Exylver for such a long time--I just needed to- AND I HAD A REASON FOR IT
I mean...
Who doesn't know this feeling that media takes over your brain for a second and your healthy knowledge just derps out on you.
You go to the store like a zombie and buy those products you will never need, but hey they were in a fancy commercial you saw on TV earlier.
Stupid, stupid, stupid. We all know we shouldn't but once in a while it happens.
Got inspired by an artwork made by Mezamero
such prettyyyyy
and used a reference from fourteenmodelmanagement.tumblr… thank you reverse image search ;v;
Exylver Lyne © IdiotTwins
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Comments: 32
Greetings from
So this one is pretty awesome. It sure stands out among many thumbs that show up on my feed. The idea is great. Creative and mysterious. The colours are great. Nice contrast between the green and orange. I even like the contrast of the more realistic approach you used on the girl vs. simplistic approach you used for the background. I only have three suggestions I consider constructive:
1) The light source. If you look at the art pieces by Mezamero (wait, if this name is Japanese, it means wake up!), he/she uses strong contrast between the light and shadow. I think you are trying too but the contrast is right now a bit weak and the light source is a bit unclear. If the light is as is, it is pretty weak, so her body would most likely much darker. If the light is lighting up the edge of her shoulder (i.e., backside), it shouldn't cast a light on the edge of her breasts (almost frontside). Try using more contrast between your light and dark values and be more strict about the light source, and our piece will really pop out!
2) Anatomy is a bit off. The face is great, but the alignment with shoulders seems bit skewed. Not too noticeable but gives a bit of a weird feel. Like the distance from the top of her right shoulder to her breast is too long. But this stuff is easily fixable by using a model.
3) The orange light is too dim. It's a great idea, but go bold! Use much stronger and brighter orange to pop the piece more.
That's it. Otherwise I think this is a great work. Keep it up
Cheerios
Blue
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Ohh thank you so much for giving me this critique and your kind compliments!
I feel like there are some points i can definitely learn from and use in the future ♥
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Oh no, thank you for your art. It caught my eye, and I discovered Mezamero on top of it. It inspired me in a few different ways altogether. So pleasure is mine
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Hey awsome piece !
i really love the way the light falls it gives the piece a really creppy cool look you also did an awsome job with the trees in the forground really deatailed! the light on her is really cool too to the thing is see right way is that her face is slitle out of prospective i see that he shin i think you wanted to show the neck too i myself have always problems with this too it would help if you get alittle bit more contest in there to show were the shin ends and the neck starts ^^ the secound this is the eyes the left eye is alittle bit to far apart from the nose if you would make the eye alittle bit smaller and put i alittle bit closer to the nose i think that probelm should be fixed in no time ^^ the last thing i see is that the left arm
gets smaller and smaller (if thats with in the anatomy of her thats fine) but for human anatomy the arm should have one more muscle you know the one with like the bump~ i don't know the name right now ^^ the rest of the piece looks really great again awsome job ! and i think you did an awsome job with the refrence some people copy to mutch and others they copy nothing but you did a nice job on this
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Ohh thank you so much for giving me this critique and your kind compliments!
I feel like there are some points i can definitely learn from and use in the future ♥
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Thanx a lot!
I don't draw much art with deeper concepts, but I'm still really proud of this one!
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You should be proud its so good
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whooo blij want dat is ook de mijne xd
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Thank you ^^
I think it turned out quite well
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ahh thanx liv
haven't heard from you in a while ;A;
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Love it! I love everything about surrealism! Great job!
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thanx a lot!
it really means a lot to me ^^
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