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iFlerzy — A Kiss for Spring
Published: 2013-06-03 17:00:08 +0000 UTC; Views: 509; Favourites: 21; Downloads: 0
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Title of Art: A Kiss for SpringCategory: Pencil Art - Head-Shot - Own Character
Date: 3rd of June, 2013
Used time: Around 2 days (hanging around with my laziness)
Using:
Mechanical Pencil, Eraser
Note: There will be 2 scans on this Deviation, this is the 1st scan.
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❁ Ｄｅｓｃｒｉｐｔｉｏｎ
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This is one of my unnamed characters, drew with the theme "Spring", although it doesn't really look like Spring at all. (´；ω；`)
I much enjoy drawing the two carps over there, the water seems to be much more difficult to draw, although the fluid looked like its easy to draw. (Recalling the moments when drawing Bottle Miku)
Hope you enjoy this deviation, please do leave a critique, or a review about this art. Critiques on anatomy will be very appreciated! (Currently studying anatomy and body builds of a person)
Thank you so much for viewing!
- i.A
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Comments: 3
Hi flerzy! I love when you post something new. Your art is so lovely <3
Here is my opinion/critique: I think the anatomy is fine, however, I think by adding in the flowy lines from her eye it draws away the attention to your drawing as a whole. Maybe using the flowy lines to represent water for the koi would be an idea if you wanted to keep those in the drawing.
Other than that, I think your shading is wonderful. And the koi with the water look so realistic. I love it! 
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Thank you for the praise and critique!
I see, I'm glad that the anatomy is fine! At the moment you've mentioned, I take a look back at the drawing and yeah, the flowing seemed to be off'ed. I'll take your opinion in my mind - thank you for sharing your critique!
Since it's now a holiday for me, yes, I will try to post more c:
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