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IgnitionInStars — Tempest by-nc-nd
Published: 2012-02-01 20:09:34 +0000 UTC; Views: 293; Favourites: 12; Downloads: 4
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Description i am feeble,
just ask the wind.

a gust of cold air
threatens the slamming of doors
i dare not leave open.

howling for a plea of understanding
with such long forgotten urgency,

the wind is a former lover.
and i am three sheets from him
with no nerve to stand against his force.

one blow past potency,
i am all but free.
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Comments: 8

ClioStorm [2012-02-04 09:39:43 +0000 UTC]

lovely your words fit together very well =]

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BeyondJen [2012-02-03 01:35:05 +0000 UTC]

Y'all write some pretty, pretty words together and work the emotion well.

one blow past potency,
i am all but free.

Yep, I like that one.

Nicely done, you two.

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KissTheSunrise [2012-02-02 06:36:14 +0000 UTC]

Nice Julz. You guys are the best wonky collab poets in Middle Earth.. honest.. this is fierce and brave.
Well done. [clapping both hands]

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sunshinegypsy [2012-02-02 06:32:15 +0000 UTC]

This is great. Your writing really goes well together.

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little-supernova [2012-02-01 23:45:50 +0000 UTC]

You two are like two peas in a pod -- magic of nature.

Love that first stanza, Fuzzy.

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FuzzyHoser [2012-02-01 20:10:50 +0000 UTC]

I do like you, a lot.
Also, I like your lovely wordies.

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sunshinegypsy In reply to FuzzyHoser [2012-02-02 06:32:03 +0000 UTC]

You guys rock together.

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FuzzyHoser In reply to sunshinegypsy [2012-02-03 04:16:58 +0000 UTC]

D'aww, thanks!

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