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First things first--plot twists have to be planned if you really want to pull them off. It’s hard to add a good or even passible plot twist after you’ve already started planning and writing your story. If you think you need a twist because what you’re writing doesn’t seem able to stand on it’s own or isn’t interesting enough without a twist, adding a one in isn’t going to help much. You’ve got to plan the twist from the beginning so that it make sense and, while it still surprises the reader, they won’t feel like you cheated or tried to pull one over on them.

Once you know why your story should have a plot twist and what the twist is, exactly, there are a few different ways to keep it a surprise to your readers until the big reveal. One common methods is a red herring, or leading your readers to suspect one thing is going to happen and then surprising them with something else instead. This is common in mysteries when the detectives suspect one person but it turns out to be someone else. The first suspect is the red herring. However, I don’t really like red herring because they can often feel like a cheap trick used just to fill time, and most smart people can spot them anyhow.

You can try letting your twist happen completely out of the blue, but you better have a damn good reason for it because readers don’t like this kind of trick very often unless it’s for a good reason. Try to avoid having a totally new character step in to save the day. I mean, unless that character was at least mentioned earlier or is going to become a big deal very soon after, I’d avoid this kind of thing. Also avoid convenient coincidences as much as possible. For readers to be convinced and emotionally invested in your story, everything that happens should be directly caused by a character's actions or choices.

My favorite type of plot twist is the one I should’ve seen coming but didn’t because I didn’t want it to happen. This would be a good guy trying out to be a bad guy, pretty much any type of betrayal, killing or harming a favorite character, or something shocking the reader just wouldn’t imagine you’d actually do. You can subtly elude to these types of twists, but as long as the audience doesn’t want it to happen, they’ll be surprised. The best plot twists are the ones the reader doesn't want to see coming.

The biggest thing to be careful of is to not back yourself into a corner or become predictable. If your characters always have more than one possible option, escape, suspect, etc., then your readers will always have to keep guessing and won’t know where you’re going to take them next. That’s good. If they can’t figure out what will happen next and want to find out, they’ll keep reading. But if you only leave room for one possible outcome, readers don’t have to guess what will happen next, and that’s boring.

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illuminara In reply to ??? [2016-12-31 14:03:25 +0000 UTC]

Hmmmm ... I think you may be taking inspiration from uninspired sources. Just to be a bit blunt, why do you want to write something so similar to a hundred other stories that have already been told? 

Besides, there are a lot of reasons a person can be a villain. Have you seen Avatar: The Last Airbender? Zuko, Azula, Ty Lee, and Mai all have parents and are all on the wrong side of the "good guys" for different reasons (which is revealed in The Beach episode in season three). I'm sure you can come up with a more interesting reason, too, if you really think about it.

If you're gut is telling you something is a cliche, it probably is. Besides, why does the villain character have to act like a bitch? Where is that written? Think outside the box a bit and see what you can come up with. What would be a fun character to write? What would make her important and interesting to the show? What are her redeeming qualities? Why would the readers care about her and be surprised to find out she's the villain? You can either write her as just another generic character, or you can find an interesting way to make her an important, interesting, and fun part of the story. And if there's truly no way to do that, then maybe it's not an interesting story after all. But that's for you to determine. 

Good luck!

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SeraphenaParks [2016-03-21 18:07:19 +0000 UTC]

I'm not sure about my twist. I don't know if it counts or not as one.

It involves a character who is a Valkyrie and hates humans for their violence; she's bitter and hates basically everyone. She's immune to a curse that's turning all the humans around the kingdom to stone like a plague. She also has one of the statues that she won't let anyone near. Then it's revealed (probably via flashback) that it's her fault for the curse. She was in love with a human, who eventual was driven insane and he plucked out her eye to use in a spell that was supposed to make him immortal like her so they could be together. And he turned to stone setting the whole thing off. But she still loves him.

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illuminara In reply to SeraphenaParks [2016-05-29 16:34:11 +0000 UTC]

Hey! Sorry it took me forever to get back with you ... Anyhow, that sounds like a pretty good twist to me! I would encourage you to think about this character's arc. What does reveling this about her past do to cause her to change or take action or just generally cause something to happen in the story? If it's just there to explain the character, it's not really a twist. A twist (or any plot point, really) should set off some kind of action or reaction that drives the story forward. 

Good luck with your writing!

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SeraphenaParks In reply to illuminara [2016-05-29 17:26:34 +0000 UTC]

Ooh, thanks! I'll think about that. 

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illuminara In reply to SeraphenaParks [2016-05-29 21:35:09 +0000 UTC]

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Startoucher [2016-03-17 01:00:46 +0000 UTC]

The plot twist I've seen a few times that I really didn't see coming is someone who isn't what they seem. Like, you think someone is innocent, but they turn out to be evil.
I think one of the best examples of this is Wreck-it Ralph (SPOILERS, DUH). We were introduced to the character Turbo earlier so we know him and his backstory but I never would have guessed that King Candy was him. It was assumed Turbo was dead, since he was never seen from again, and the reason Turbo was explained in the first place is that he was like a metaphor, and had NOTHING to do with King Candy.

I'm trying to write a plot twist, and I feel like it's incredible obvious. There's this guard (a shadow pony), Taldusk, and when he was little, he used to know a black unicorn filly who was always called "Bandit". Bandit got bullied a lot and eventually moved away with her mom. Years later, one night someone comes and and steals from the treasury. A little later we get introduced to a light grey shadow mare named Dawn. Over time, Taldusk becomes good friends with Dawn, and realizes it's Bandit who's stealing.
But here's the twist: Bandit IS Dawn. Dawn is her real name. When she's among the shadow ponies she hides her horn and lets her coat be the natural color (it greyed out as she grew older), but when she steals, she changes her coat black by magic, and becomes Bandit, the girl that was bullied all those years ago.

I think people won't want Dawn to be Bandit, because it will ruin everything between her and Taldusk, but I feel like it's just too obvious!!

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imouttaideasforname In reply to Startoucher [2017-04-14 04:29:41 +0000 UTC]

I think if you don't mention bandit and taldusk's past too much, people wouldn't figure it out that quickly

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squanpie [2016-02-10 22:07:55 +0000 UTC]

One of the reasons I always hated hat Sherlock Holmes story where they dragged in the taxi driver who'd spoken once in the whole thing to point the final finger at. The fun of detective stories is guessing along with them (with any story but those in particular) and I always feel most cheated when you find out you didn't have a hope in hell of guessing correctly.

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illuminara In reply to squanpie [2016-02-11 02:36:58 +0000 UTC]

Exactly! That's always frustrating!

The ironic thing is that, when a detective story tries to be too cryptic, that usually makes it easier for me to guess who did it because it's basically either a) the only person they don't suspect, b) the person who points the detective to their first real suspect, or c) the person they suspected from the very beginning but then cleared in the first half of the story for some reason. I've watch too many procedural cop shows ...

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squanpie In reply to illuminara [2016-02-11 22:41:14 +0000 UTC]

It's why I love the Poirot (sp?) movies (not actually got round to reading any of the books yet) where instead of everybody trying to seem innocent, everybody is made almost equally guilty looking. They're almost always closed set-ups (boats, holidays in remote locations, etc) where it has to be one of the group, and almost everything apart from that tiny clue is given out until the end when the key that links all true clues together is given.

My big one in detective stories is usually to suspect the person who hired the detective. It's the one that authors seem to go for about ten episodes/books in as a 'twist' that I've read so often it's not surprising anymore.

I do find it easy to predict a lot of novels though. As soon as you take that step back and think in terms of characters' purposes, things almost always get a bit too easy. Song of Ice and Fire is a big one, with all the 'shocking' character deaths people go on about that I predicted pages in advance. Characters that were redundant, plated the mentor role (Gandalf always dies), or who if left to continue unchecked would have solved the plot without the need for the 'main' characters to do anything.

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illuminara In reply to squanpie [2016-02-19 01:04:27 +0000 UTC]

Those types of mysteries are always fun!

Yeah, that twist has gotten pretty old ... not sure why people still think it's surprising.

Haha, that's why I prefer my mysteries in short form rather than terribly thick books. They give me waaaay too much time to think and figure out. I at least have a small chance of being surprised in 40 minutes.

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Toffnm [2015-11-07 16:39:18 +0000 UTC]

I know I'm late to the party here, but I'm working on a story with a few twists and I wondered if I am overdoing it.

Basically my 4 characters (all children) are running away from a deadly virus. My first twist happens at about 65% of the story, where the characters find their father and he is sick from the virus. (I'm not sure if this counts as a twist, as they probably should have seen it coming?) They leave him, and at 75% it's revealed that my MC has the virus too. However, it can be cured, so they set off to get help. At the climax, we find out that MC is too sick to be helped. He'll die no matter what. Which is probably not a very good ending, but his goal has been to save his siblings so it's sort of a bittersweet end. His siblings are then saved.

Obviously lots of other things happen in this story as well, but I don't consider them plot twists, though I'm having a little trouble defining plot points and plot twists and seeing the difference there. Bwah, there's so much more to storytelling than what you'd think from just reading a novel x-x  

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illuminara In reply to Toffnm [2016-01-15 00:23:39 +0000 UTC]

Sorry for the delay! I got busy and failed to keep an eye on my dA comments.

Anyhow, I would probably plan some kind of twist much sooner, like 25% of the way in or at the end of the first act depending on your plotting philosophy. Typically the biggest twist or game-changing reveal comes as close to the middle of the story as possible, and then there's another twist right before the end. But I mean, you can do whatever you want as long as the story has a good pace and readers are engaged the entire time. The only reason twists exist in the first place is to ensure optimal reader engagement emotional payoff.

As far as the actual events of twists you mentioned, they sound good to me. As long as the character completes his main objective (saving his siblings), then it should have a satisfying ending no matter what happens to him. Sacrifice is always a good emotional payoff.

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Power-of-Passion [2015-10-21 22:45:03 +0000 UTC]

Could a good plot twist be something crazy insignificant that happened near the begining of the story that turns out to have a much greater meaning later on?

For example i watched an anime were this good alien character who had her race destroyed by the bad guys could understand the language of the bad guys near the start of the season, she later turned out to be a member of the bad guys race near the end of the same season, and she was a spy, unbeknowest to herself.

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illuminara In reply to Power-of-Passion [2015-10-22 00:10:44 +0000 UTC]

Yes, that is a great form of plot twist! As long as it's not too obvious ... unless you want the audience to know but not the other characters. That would be a plot device called ironic tension in which the audience knows something one or more of the characters don't know and are left in suspense waiting for them to find out. It can be quite effective! But having the twist be a surprise to both the audience and the readers is also very effective if you can pull it off. Especially if you can make your audience really like this character; that way they won't want to see the twist coming.

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Power-of-Passion In reply to illuminara [2015-10-22 00:37:31 +0000 UTC]

They did a great job with that because she was like this 11 year old character who made flowers for everybody and always thought she was being bothersome, but then after becoming almost family with them, it turned out the main villain had a telepathic connection with her that even she didn't know about.
And that was how the villains always had them cornered.

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illuminara In reply to Power-of-Passion [2015-10-23 12:57:42 +0000 UTC]

That's pretty good storytelling right there!

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Jake-Jakers [2015-08-08 09:59:21 +0000 UTC]

Another tip: Don't feel the need to make every plot twist to be a massive game changer. this can actually kill a story. (looks over at Shyamalan).

I honestly think that the point of the plot twist should be to tell the reader that they can simply assume that they know everything, since the plot twist will show the characters don't know everything.

That said, I think you hit the nail on the head.

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illuminara In reply to Jake-Jakers [2015-08-08 16:54:53 +0000 UTC]

So true!

Exactly. I tend to think of plot twists more as reveals than game changers ... like, here is a startling new piece of information the character has to react to and deal with. 

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cartoonking1 [2015-07-26 05:53:04 +0000 UTC]

I love the twist that you don't see coming but still have enough hidden hints that you can figure it out for yourself.

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illuminara In reply to cartoonking1 [2015-07-29 03:35:02 +0000 UTC]

Oh yeah! As long as it's not too easy ... I love the twists that make you kick yourself for NOT seeing it coming, haha.

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cartoonking1 In reply to illuminara [2015-07-29 05:06:39 +0000 UTC]

Totally, that's the way I love twist. Nice little hints that you don't notice and blow your mind when you look back on them.

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illuminara In reply to cartoonking1 [2015-07-29 15:10:53 +0000 UTC]

Oh yeah.

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cartoonking1 In reply to illuminara [2015-07-29 19:39:49 +0000 UTC]

Like Gravity Falls.

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Astrikos [2015-06-28 02:54:03 +0000 UTC]

What a helpful resource! Very detailed ands thorough, well done!

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illuminara In reply to Astrikos [2015-06-28 13:53:33 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! I'm glad you find it helpful!

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Astrikos In reply to illuminara [2015-06-29 21:38:05 +0000 UTC]

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Toffnm [2015-05-12 20:39:51 +0000 UTC]

My favorite plot twist ever is from the book The Supernaturalist, when the heroes realize that the monsters they are killing are actually helping people, which makes the heroes the bad guys. That shocked me as a reader as much as the main character himself.

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illuminara In reply to Toffnm [2015-05-13 15:05:47 +0000 UTC]

That is a good twist!

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ourage [2015-05-11 03:05:33 +0000 UTC]

Thanks so much, illuminara! One thing, though--do you mean "allude to" instead of "elude to" in the second-to-last paragraph? (Maybe I'm just confused ) Great article, as always!

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GuinevereToGwen [2015-05-10 12:44:57 +0000 UTC]

For me, the best plot twists are when they completely shock the reader in the moment, but when they think back on it they realize it was unavoidable and that it makes total sense.

My least favourite plot twists are when writers add a plot twist only for shock value and that doesn't actually make sense in context, e.g. the recent film Now You See Me.

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illuminara In reply to GuinevereToGwen [2015-05-10 14:33:52 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, exactly! Those are the best. Sadly, they're not as common as they should be. If you want to watch a TV show with an excellent story and fantastically shocking moments, The Pretender is one of my all-time favorites. It's from the 90s, but it was way ahead of its time.

Yeah, I didn't much care for that movie, either. None of it made much sense, and it didn't have a good plot structure at all. 

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GuinevereToGwen In reply to illuminara [2015-05-10 15:21:45 +0000 UTC]

I will check it out, then! Thanks for the recommendation!

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illuminara In reply to GuinevereToGwen [2015-05-10 18:42:29 +0000 UTC]

Any time!

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WokenbladeRiku [2015-05-08 19:09:22 +0000 UTC]

Good. The plot twist I was planning for my story is valid.

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illuminara In reply to WokenbladeRiku [2015-05-08 19:44:38 +0000 UTC]

Most excellent.

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Stettafire [2015-05-07 09:31:08 +0000 UTC]

When a random charcter come out of no where to save the hero...
Deus ex machina! xD

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illuminara In reply to Stettafire [2015-05-07 16:09:46 +0000 UTC]

Indeed!

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Stettafire In reply to illuminara [2015-05-07 17:21:35 +0000 UTC]

xD

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AsjJohnson [2015-05-06 22:42:39 +0000 UTC]

in a fic I've been working on, I thought of a twist from the start, but... it's something that people want to see, so I tend to try discouraging them. ^_^" I guess there's no good way of throwing people off track for things like that.

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illuminara In reply to AsjJohnson [2015-05-07 02:31:02 +0000 UTC]

Hmmmm ... pulling of a plot twist is always a trick. As long as you keep the immediate story engaging enough, readers won't think about possible plot twists, and you're golden. 

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Leopold002 [2015-05-06 22:30:53 +0000 UTC]

Unexpected twists and turns are the best!

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illuminara In reply to Leopold002 [2015-05-07 02:29:45 +0000 UTC]

Indeed!

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DanielsCustomizables [2015-05-06 22:16:13 +0000 UTC]

I really like the red herring plot twist if done correctly. But in order to do such a plot twist correctly the reader needs to be able to deduce it if he pays really close attention.

 Plot twist that I hate are when a character suddenly appears in a story, or when one character is supposed to be the "most powerful", gets defeated, and then a new character shows up who is now even more powerful than the original "most powerful." If you know what I mean.

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illuminara In reply to DanielsCustomizables [2015-05-07 02:43:03 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, I can almost always see through red herrings and assume everyone else can too (even though I'm sure not everyone can), so I tend to avoid them in my own writing.

Yeah, that kind of thing is pretty annoying. It seems to happen more in anime than most of the other stuff I watch, thankfully. Sadly, the getting saved at the last minute thing is pretty common in sci-fi, but I love the genre anyhow.

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DanielsCustomizables In reply to illuminara [2015-05-07 07:13:26 +0000 UTC]

LOL

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Chaldemone [2015-05-06 20:53:31 +0000 UTC]

I really love the faulty narrator plot twist, when you realize at the end that the narrator can't tell dreams from reality or is delusional or occasionally enters fugue states. 

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illuminara In reply to Chaldemone [2015-05-07 02:32:02 +0000 UTC]

Hmmm ... that is great when you can pull it off. I hadn't really thought of it as a plot twist, but I suppose it could be if you played your cards right. Honestly, though, I hate it when it turns out a character's dreaming/delusional. It feels pretty cheap. But an unreliable narrator is much more interesting. 

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Chaldemone In reply to illuminara [2015-05-07 08:12:27 +0000 UTC]

Memento is still a classic film. 

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illuminara In reply to Chaldemone [2015-05-07 16:11:07 +0000 UTC]

Perhaps ... if you're into that kind of thing. I prefer stories like The Matrix (just the first one, obviously ). I mean, if you're gonna go for a mind-fuck, you might as well go all out.

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