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Published: 2011-09-26 15:52:27 +0000 UTC; Views: 17040; Favourites: 896; Downloads: 735
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First commission for vampyou.com [link]Glasses schoolgirl character.
Program: SAI Paint Tool
Any critique is welcome.
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Commission closed.Open again 15 october 2011.
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Comments: 211
This is my first time writing a critique but this is what i think about the picture. the lines are beautiful and the colors you chose fits perfectly in to the picture. The scene and perspective is very good and the road looks really long. But even if you was gonna blur the tree and the leaves out, you could have added a bit more details. And one small thing that disturbs me is that her hair in front of her eyes, it just get cut like a straight line. It would look better if you made it look like every other hair straws on the picture .
Otherwise I love the picture e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/sā¦ " width="15" height="15" alt="
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Thank you very much for your compliment,critique and suggestion.I read it all.I will try to do better next time.
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I'd like to see what she looks like now, as a vampire.
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You have to visit the website.
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Amazing. It's like one of those dating games or something like that when you try to win over someone
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Thank you very much^^
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Great drawing! SO cute! I looovvee your style!! 
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Thank you.I'm glad that you love my work^^
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you're welcome! Keep up the good work! c;
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Much the same set of comments as chillingo with the addition that if the trees and leaves are going to be blurred, the so should the buildings, but only one got the blur treatment. I don't know Sai all that well, but if you were working in layers, a perspective blur (setting perspective lines, then increasing the blur as the perspective recedes) might help. Other than that, it's a very good piece.
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I see.Thanks for your suggestion.I have to use Photoshop to do that.SAI has blur tool but it doesn't work as good as Photoshop blur filter.
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Beautifully done ^______^
The scenery and colors are so beautiful and soft *W*
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Thank you very much^^
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gross long time not see your work seem different then ussual...I love it..i saw that the hair looks very well blend..
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Yeah,i adjusted my style.I'm glad that you love it^^
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I'm glad that you love it^^
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