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Published: 2017-01-11 21:36:26 +0000 UTC; Views: 2338; Favourites: 37; Downloads: 0
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Spots off, Claws In
It is a reveal story that I had in my head since about November, so now I’m finally starting to post it. It is my first ever try to make a comic so I guess there gonna be some offence against comic rules here and there (also my poor editing skills), still I hope someone will like it and enjoy as I am when drawing it.
It is my version of possible reveal story and though I haven’t actually read any (fanfiction nor comic or so) I guess there’s lots of them around so I guess it’s possible there might be some similarities, but if so, it wasn’t intentional, right?
Still - Please don’t repost, edit or use anyhow, I’m putting lots of effort into it and I want to decide myself where and how would I present it. Thank you.
tumblr post: ilwinsdrawings.tumblr.com/post…
(reference pictures - for second picture (null-entity.deviantart.com/art… by Null-Entity and Tasastock ), and fourth and seventh picture (senshistock.deviantart.com/art… ) )
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Comments: 14
You are makeing a very nice story: your dialogues are great, your draw well, the characters poses and expressions are expressive. So it's really entertaining. If you would like to reach a broader audience, I would recommend you to look at some basics of comic panneling and speech bubble use, because some adjustment could make it look more professional. I hope you don't mind my recmmendation.
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Thank you for your comment, especially for mentioning the poses and expressions, that means a lot to me.
And no I don't mind recommendation 
Anyway - I know it would probably sound lazy but I don't think I'd try to change it... well that sounded out bad... I don't know how to say it. I mean... I'm not gonna search for tips and rules etc. for making comics (and I'm sorta scared of speech bubbles, bring back memories of kids comics (yeah a certain one in our country), not quite in bad, just... (again, I don't know how to express myself, sorry about that!)), so no searching for rules etc. and for making it look more professional I would need mainly better technical skills and devices
I'm sorry it probably sound careless or so and it's not that I didn't care about how it looks, it's just... its just me %D.
I still appreciate your comment and recommendation, really! Thank you
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I understand
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No, not quite bad, I said it's not that the memories would be right bad, it's just sort of weird and uncomfortable. Yeah uncomfortable is probably the closest word for it
And thanks for enjoying the story anyway!
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lovely drawings ^^
thanks for using the collab stock
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Thank you!
When one finds a perfect reference picture the drawing is much easier, so thanks for great stock pictures!
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thank you! i'm glad you find them useful ^^
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Wooh, now he can take her home and get her cleaned up o.o
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Very happy to help make this possible/easier
I woudl onyl ask if you could add/alter the stock credit to :dev: or :icon: as per my rules and also to credit Tasastock as it was duo stock
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Right, sorry, I know I read the rules but forget about it a bit, sorry.
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