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(RP Starter)You where minding your own business walking in the park. The temperature had just started to drop and it was starting to feel a lot like winter as it should considering the time of year. You see a girl standing in the middle of the path way. She stared absently mindedly at the river. For some odd reason instead of walking around her you tap her on the shoulder. She simply blinks and begins walking forward, her face void of any emotion. Furrowing your brows you watch as she slips off her shoes and places them next to the bridge before taking a deep breath in. you shake your head and continue walking shivering from the cold. About 5 steps later you hear a slash and look over to see the girl was gone. Walking over to the bridge you see her floating along the river smiling lightly with her eyes close. And yell at her asking what she’s doing but she doesn’t respond. Instead she continues to drift out further into the river. However her body starts to slowly sink under as she drifts out to the middle of the pond. Soon enough her body is completely submerged under water. The last thing you see is her face. Her eyes were still closed and she made no struggle to try and stay afloat, no she continued to sink with a smile plastered on her face. What shall you do?
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Louie looked on a scratched his head. "What the hell was that?" He asked aloud, still watching as the girl began to sink. He then shrugged, and remembered something very important that countless speakers hat plastered into his brain. "Remember! Suicide is wrong! Don't let people kill themselves!" The teen then looked back down at the girl, and thought a very chilling thought. 'Did she jump off that bridge to kill herself?' He thought, now moving to scratch the stubble on his chin. He looked at the bridge, then back at the girl, then back at the bridge again. "Yup," Louie said, "I'm saving her if I have something to say about that." Louie stripped off his shirt, and then his khaki pants, leaving him in only boxer shorts. "Can't risk catching hypothermia!" He said rather happily, before jumping off the banks of the river and swimming after the girl.
Though the cold water was rather irritating, as Louie preferred to swim in the summer, the boy was able to keep in mind that he was trying to save someone. He paddled forward with a front crawl about ten or fifteen feet, until he saw the silhouette of the girl. He then dove down, quickly catching a glimpse of her face, which seemed to have transitioned from a content smile to a terrified stare. "I'm coming!" Louie bubbled out, as he grabbed a hold of one of the girl's ankles. He pulled hard and kicked his legs, very thankful that the girl was much lighter than he was, and very soon, Louie reached the bank of the river once again. He was dripping and wet, and his boxers had become very cold and uncomfortable, but Louie happily lied the girl onto a dry park bench. "Now for the mouth-to-mouth resuscitation!" He happily exclaimed, pumping on the girl's chest before moving in towards her mouth.
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she had been drifting down to the bottom of the lake slowly. it was difficult for her to sink with such little body weight however since she was rather strong it wasn't completely impossible for her not to sink. her smile had faded to a content look as the sound of moving waves cleared her thought. she had no fears of dying, no she welcomed it with open arms. she could head the sound of someone yelling and her eyes opened slightly to see the blurry image of a man swimming towards her. her mouth opened slightly as air bubbles leaked from it and up to the surface of the pond. closing her eyes a single thought passed through her mind "it's alright...he won't reach me in time." with this her mouth opened a bit wider as she attempted to slip into unconscious. however she was unsuccessful as he had gripped her ankle and dragged her up to the shore. she could feel the cold and damp wood of the bench press against her back and she struggled to open her eyes. with her chest being pumped she could fell the water rise out of her lungs and her eyes opened only to see him leaning forward to breath into her mouth. she turned her head to the side and coughed up the water watching it as it spilled onto the bench and drip off. she continued to couch up the liquid only slightly glancing over at him in a slight bewilderment-
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Louie rolled his eyes, as resistance was not something he had anticipated. "Gosh darnit," He mumbled, "Now I better call 911." He walked over to his pants, which were neatly folded by the bank/beach/waters edge, and reached in to grab his phone. However, he trusted that after being saved, the girl whose name he did not know nor identity he had never cared about in any way until he saw her fall off the bridge would stay still. Thankfully, it did not take him long to dig his Iphone out of his front left pant pocket.
"This is 911," A lady said at her desk, "What is your emergency?"
"This girl, she was about to drown, but I barely saved her in time." Louie said through the speaker in a relatively calm voice. "I gave her basic CPR, but I don't know it that well. I think I need an ambulance."
"We have an ambulance heading your way." The lady responded, hanging up the phone.
Louie pressed the back button on his cell phone, while he struggled to slide his damp legs into the legs of his pants. He then slipped on his shirt, and picked up his phone before walking back over to the bench. What he saw was almost comical, as the girl who should by all definitions of the word be Dead, as in not alive, but was somehow still angry, and pouting for some reason with her arms cross. "You'll be fine." Louie said calmly, as he sat down on the bench. "I called 911, so if you caught anything from nearly drowning, you will be taken care of."
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//okay not to be rude or anything like that. but please don't anticipate my characters actions. you are not her. you don't know wither she's pouting or crying her eyes out. you can't decided that. i can. so don't take it upon yourself to give her an action. that's or me to decide. okay? okay
-she coughed up more water and watched as he walked over to his pants and called someone. wiping her mouth she watched as he continued to have a conversation on the phone and began scooting backwards on the bench until she reached the edge. shivering lightly she looked around trying to see if anyone else was around. they where alone which is understandable. no person in their right mind would be out in this cold. looking over at him once more she saw him come closer and speak of 911. her eyes widened and she sat up straight shaking her head- n...no....no.....-she said sinking into somewhat of a depression.- vai....vai vould you do that!? no....no they'll take me back. i don't vant that! i'm not going back to those people....-she said looking up at him, a spark of rage was seen in her eyes as she backed stood up only to fall to the floor. her legs were stiff from the cold however she managed to stand to her feet and look at him. her blood now beginning to boil as she looked around waiting to hear any sirens- i need to get avay...but vere vill i go...-she said quietly shivering as she looked around- y-you! you take the ambulance...i refuse to let them serve me. i von't go back to that place...-she said running a hand through her wet hair and looking at the woods. she had no choice she would make a run for it.- d..don't follow me! -she said in her thick accent as she begain to run for the woods. very quickly she climbed up a tree and began to run across the branches-
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(Perfectly understandable. I just didn't want to slow the plot in any way, so I came up with something for my character to react to in order to give some development)
Louie scratched his head in disbelief once again, and but his phone back into his pant pocket. "Well shit," he muttered, "That means I'll have to explain to some paramedics that it was a false alarm." He then scratched his chin, trying to think of a good lie. "Acid trip?" He said immediately, before shooting down that idea. "No, no. I don't do drugs." Louie then paced back and forth around the bench, and then the sirens started to ring through the sky. "God fucking dammit." Louie cursed through gritted teeth, before looking into the woods. He then looked down at his bare feet. "I really hate running through the woods barefoot, but I guess I have no choice." And so, he took a four-point running stance, and looked ahead of him.
The alarms started to approach the location of the park bench, and they were joined by police sirens, possibly inspecting an attempted suicide.
So that was the gun that sent Louie racing through the forest, following where he thought the girl was running. "Come back here!" He screamed, while sprinting at an inhuman (for him. This likely rounds out to somewhere about fifteen miles per hour, when you compute his {my} 100 meter pace) speed. "I'm in big trouble if those cops catch me, and you are too for running away!" His feet pounded against the dirt and twigs that made up the forest floor, and would occasionally be stabbed by a broken stick. However, that did not slow Louie, as he was currently running off of an odd combo of adrenaline and rage.
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I'll use this guy - ask-fear.deviantart.com/art/GO… >w< ))
At the time he had been walking back home from work, tired and cold. He felt his finger tips go numb with exhaustion. Yet as seeing the girl doing such odd things, he thought nothing of it until he heard the splash. It was as if panic alarms went off in his head as ran over in leaps. He tried to shout to the girl, watching her drift off like that he wasn't sure what to think. But no, he couldn't just let her drown. So throwing off his jacket and shoes, he dived in to the bone chilling water and shivered as he hit the water. Quickly, he swam towards her, trying to find the girl in a hurry as he held his breath and poked his head under to see if she was there.
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goooaaattttssss //
-she had been floating to the bottom at a rather slow pace. her smile was replaced with a look of content as she drifted further and further down to the pit of the lake. a few bubbles had been spilling out of her mouth and her tails floated around her limply along with the rest of her body. her eyes were half lidded as she saw the figure swimming towards her however she simply closed her eyes as more air bubbles spilled from her mouth. the coldness was surrounding her and chilling her to the bone at this point however she figured in a minute of so it would all be over. and from what she saw this figure was far away. at least to her they were. -
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He started to swim towards her, getting closer and closer with each second. Once close enough, he grabbed her and swam back up through the numbingly cold waters. Panting desperately for air, he dragged her over to land, pushing her on to side of the river before scrambling out himself. He looked over, wondering if she was still living yet in hopes that he had made it in time despite the fact she had been sinking in to the river for an abnormal amount of time. He leaned over, checking her pulse and breathing as panic still raced in his mind like a catchy song he didn't like.