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Imperphection — Guardian Angel
Published: 2004-12-24 23:01:59 +0000 UTC; Views: 254; Favourites: 5; Downloads: 6
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I’m your guardian angel,I watch you while you sleep,
I’m every single secret you tell,
And I’m with you when you weep.
With me you’ll never be alone,
Even if you’re out or just at home.
I’m that little voice inside your head,
That gives you hope when hope is dead.
If no one else forgives you I do,
Because if no one else is I’m there for you.
Even if you don’t know I’m there,
I’m always ready to tell you I care.
I’m your guardian angel,
I watch you while you sleep,
I’m every single secret you tell,
And I’m with you when you weep.
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Comments: 4
I like the fact that you repeated the first stanza at the end. It puts a nice wrap to the poem. I don't like the rhythm though, it staggers at parts. Images are also somewhat weak. I really like the concept of the poem though, and it has an interesting message. I have the sudden urge to write about guardian angels versus telescreens.
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thanks, it's great to have feedback so i can make improvements. If i do another, updated version I'll let ya know k?
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