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Published: 2008-10-06 03:10:36 +0000 UTC; Views: 80; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 0
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A conversation between Pneumonia-Land and Imploded-Shadowwritten by Cullen Hirst
I think
that
I saw you
at the Fair today,
but I didn't realize
it was you,
if
it was you,
until you
or
whoever it was
walked on by,
and
it has been bugging me
ever since.
I avoid the fair.
You must've seen
the twin
I didn't know
I had.
So no,
sorry.
Wasn't me.
I saw you driving
by B-Bops though
one time..
if your brother
still
has buzzed hair
and
everything.
might have been him.
Well
then
I am glad
I didn't say
hello
to your twin
who wouldn't have
known
who I was.
My brother
has shorter hair
than
I do,
but
I woulldn't exactly
call it
buzzed.
I didn't really
take you
to be
a fair go-er
(goer?)
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Comments: 3
It actually does read like a conversation, well a one sided conversation. I like this.
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it was actually two sided, the first and third stanzas are one perseond, and the 2nd another
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