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He woke to find Sjin and Lalna shaking him... or... himself and Sjin shaking him awake... This would take some getting used to.
"W-what happened?" he asked. His head still ached.
"You... collapsed..." Lalna answered, he seemed to understand what was happening, but looked like he didn't believe it. His next sentence was one word, one very simple but terrifying word. "Livid?"
Rythian nodded. Something was twisting his mind as they spoke, something big and powerful. How did Lalna cope with this?!
"I have some medicine... But... it effects magic. Though, you're not in your own body..."
Rythian put his hand to his head, he could barely hear the other two anymore.
"Who's Livid?" Sjin asked.
"Sjin!" Lalna shouted, causing Sjin to take his finger form Lalna's nose. "How many times do I have to tell you?!"
"WILL YOU TWO SHUT UP?!" Rythian bellowed, his voice becoming deeper and more aggressive. Even he looked taken back by this outburst.
"...Come with me, I have some pills for you." Lalna said and Rythian stood, following him.
They walked into Lalna's lab and watched the mage turned scientist pick out a little box of pills.
"Here." He handed them to Rythian.
"And what will these do?"
"Get rid of the headaches for the most part... it'll help with keeping him away. Sjin!"
"Sorry..."
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Comments: 11
DarkRainfire [2013-12-18 20:16:18 +0000 UTC]
Wait.. trying to figure it out.
In Chapter 4, (and the chapters before that)
Rythian is Sjin
Sjin is Duncan
Duncan is RythianΒ
but now...
Rythian is Livid
Duncan is Sjin
Sjin is Duncan
Confused, but this fan-fic series is still based around a VERY good idea and I will continue to enjoy
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imthederpyfox In reply to DarkRainfire [2013-12-18 20:17:19 +0000 UTC]
what? Nope, sjin is still lalna, Rythian is still Duncan, but is also livid, and Duncan is rythiaan... its a bit confusing
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DarkRainfire In reply to imthederpyfox [2013-12-18 20:23:13 +0000 UTC]
Before, in chapter 3 (when they all met and started bickering), Rythian was sjin... he faked a sjin voice and hugged sips...
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kaia2cool In reply to DarkRainfire [2014-01-26 18:28:44 +0000 UTC]
....Oops...These things arer confusing...hehe.
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imthederpyfox In reply to DarkRainfire [2013-12-18 20:25:05 +0000 UTC]
...oh shizz... I was just going by what my co-...worker? put in his story, I didn't really read through the other parts
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DarkRainfire In reply to imthederpyfox [2013-12-18 20:31:38 +0000 UTC]
Lol, don't worry; I spend a lot of time around these type of body switching stories so it might only be me. But I suggest putting something in the description, maybe?Β
*whispers* where's chapter 5? *whispers* I think i'm being a terrible navigator here...
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imthederpyfox In reply to DarkRainfire [2013-12-18 20:33:20 +0000 UTC]
I did say in the description about the fact that it might be chapter 6 or seven cuz I got confused, I just put chapter 7 because its the part after the other writters part...
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DarkRainfire In reply to imthederpyfox [2013-12-18 20:36:52 +0000 UTC]
oh... woops ok
welp, keep up with the story and make it epicΒ Β
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imthederpyfox In reply to DarkRainfire [2013-12-18 20:38:27 +0000 UTC]
ehe thanks friend
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