Lalita17 [2012-02-14 03:54:26 +0000 UTC]

Absoloutly stellar ~ what an excellent piece of writing

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MissTopazz [2011-12-28 15:40:57 +0000 UTC]

Fuck yes. This I like.

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LupeSjiler [2011-10-21 23:16:29 +0000 UTC]

I love the last two sentences

Those wouldn't have made sense without the rest of it, so I liked the rest of it as well but the last two sentences were the best!

Very unusual (for me) verse-thingy but not bad at all!

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soaringmoose [2011-10-16 19:42:43 +0000 UTC]

You got me going "aww, i feel bad for him" and everything...and then you just gotta throw that last bit in there like "zing!"

haha, you're such a jerk and i loooooooove it.

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Joanne-Goulty-Cullen [2011-10-16 10:03:21 +0000 UTC]

Even though I've already said it, I have to say it again. This is beautiful.

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