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Another page from my graphic novel "Sol"Chapter 1 Page 16
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I actually had originally considered doing that and made a judgement call to leave it out. Maybe that was the wrong call...
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I find the last two pages vague. It's good you don't spoon feed your readers everything but I think it could use a bit more dialogue. I'm also thinking that in your most recent page, the person she's talking to could give indication that she told him something dangerous. Maybe have her say "Wow, I can't believe your dad would be involved with that!" It's up to you though.
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