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Broken, empty promises, a world so dull and deadLeaving me to suffer as I hang upon this thread
Tears of glass begin to fall, a heartbeat made of stone
I was left to struggle for a worthless, lovely throne
Dreadful, lost emotions, slowly flowing through my veins
Aching thoughts and torture causing fatal bits of pain
Shadows swallow all I was and all I am to be
Slicing off my wings, and now demanding I be free
Poison sneaking through my breaths and deep into my soul
Pieces lost have been replaced to make a damaged whole
Anger rushing through my mind, for me, for them, for this
I have felt emotion for a thought that can't existβ¦
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Comments: 20
InconsequentialPoet In reply to whitemidnightshadow [2012-05-10 03:02:25 +0000 UTC]
Thank you very much <3
~ Mikki
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InconsequentialPoet In reply to BBRAE1994 [2012-05-10 03:00:31 +0000 UTC]
Gracias <3
~ Mikki
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InconsequentialPoet In reply to Silverstorm318 [2012-04-29 22:57:27 +0000 UTC]
Thanks!!
~ Mikki
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KBeth [2012-04-17 21:23:50 +0000 UTC]
You are a talented poet, thank you for sharing your work.
Love does not exist?
What is love?
Is it the passing days waiting for one with whom you can share your life?
Is it the reason some people die?
Is it passion flowing through your veins?
Is it desire, longing, and pain?
Nay, love is none of the above.
True love is hard to discover
Love is an action, not the emotions of a "lover"
Love is doing that which you do not wish to do
For someone else, not for you
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InconsequentialPoet In reply to KBeth [2012-04-18 14:02:41 +0000 UTC]
That's amazing!!!
And thank you very much...
~ Mikki
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KBeth In reply to InconsequentialPoet [2012-04-18 15:46:39 +0000 UTC]
Hahahaha!
You're welcome!
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InconsequentialPoet In reply to randomlyinspired-21 [2012-04-12 13:58:45 +0000 UTC]
Thank you so much! <3
~ MIkki
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randomlyinspired-21 In reply to InconsequentialPoet [2012-04-13 07:47:53 +0000 UTC]
You're welcome and good luck with that novel!
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InconsequentialPoet In reply to randomlyinspired-21 [2012-04-13 16:44:22 +0000 UTC]
Hehe, thank you again ^.^
~ MIkki
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randomlyinspired-21 In reply to InconsequentialPoet [2012-04-14 08:06:42 +0000 UTC]
welcome! ^^
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Iluvpieforever101 [2012-04-12 04:10:29 +0000 UTC]
This is beautiful, but love does exist. You just have to take time to look for it. Who knows it might find you. I hope you find the one for you.
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InconsequentialPoet In reply to Iluvpieforever101 [2012-04-12 13:59:43 +0000 UTC]
Well seeing that I'm not even a teenager yet, I do have some time to wait XD
And thank you very much ^.^
~ Mikki
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Iluvpieforever101 In reply to InconsequentialPoet [2012-04-12 17:06:42 +0000 UTC]
Your welcome
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MummyWriter [2012-04-11 13:17:31 +0000 UTC]
Very beautiful! I love how you were able to sum up the whole idea in three stanzas!
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InconsequentialPoet In reply to MummyWriter [2012-04-12 00:23:30 +0000 UTC]
thank you!!!! <3
~MIkki
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