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InconsequentialPoet β€” New Start
Published: 2012-05-13 22:57:11 +0000 UTC; Views: 356; Favourites: 15; Downloads: 4
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Description They haunt my thoughts, my fears, my heart
They watch me, struggling to tear me apart
They know, they hear every word in my mind
Not a single moment they dare leave behind
They stare like it's a masterpiece, left to be defined
To sympathy in their hearts they often are blind
Nothingness blankets the sky and the earth
Leaving me to wonder what else this is worth
Other than the pain and the everlasting fears
The shaking, the aching, the breaking, the tears
Making me curious… what does it mean
Being a human with a future unseen
Could I be damaged the way I was before?
No one can promise there won't be anymore
Perhaps the happiness won't last very long
For each time I smile, it feels dark and wrong
Sometimes I envy the thoughts of the dead
The lack of emotions, the lack of regret
What is love if it's not a broken heart
And what is my death if it's not a new start?
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Comments: 15

xxspoooonsxxx [2012-05-14 14:39:33 +0000 UTC]

I think poetry's best rhythm is the essence that comes from the soul that you can feel through the words and I think this one definitely has that.

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InconsequentialPoet In reply to xxspoooonsxxx [2012-05-14 19:38:04 +0000 UTC]

First off, thank you so much for the watch!!!!

And second, thanks a ton ^.^ I think the rhythm is fine, just not like every other one of my poems... but I guess change it good

~ MIkki

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xxspoooonsxxx In reply to InconsequentialPoet [2012-05-14 19:39:09 +0000 UTC]

Welcome

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Blackfoxtails [2012-05-14 05:58:50 +0000 UTC]

I like it, the rhythm is there, just vary unique. I've writes tuns of poems under five minute, if I don't they run away before I can write em down.

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InconsequentialPoet In reply to Blackfoxtails [2012-05-14 19:39:29 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!!
And I feel the same... I have to write as fast as I can, otherwise the poems get away from me XD

~ Mikki

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Blackfoxtails In reply to InconsequentialPoet [2012-05-14 23:14:15 +0000 UTC]

Ya and anyone who disturbs you gets yelled at hu.

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IceClawWolf [2012-05-14 05:41:11 +0000 UTC]

I write poems in 10 minutes and they're sooo much worse than this. I loviee it <333

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InconsequentialPoet In reply to IceClawWolf [2012-05-14 19:38:26 +0000 UTC]

Aww, thanks! And I doubt they're terrible, don't doubt yourself

~ MIkki

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IceClawWolf In reply to InconsequentialPoet [2012-05-15 05:37:41 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome! And I ersonally think that my work isn't that great.

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InconsequentialPoet In reply to IceClawWolf [2012-05-15 07:44:40 +0000 UTC]

Well I'm sorry :C

~ Mikki

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IceClawWolf In reply to InconsequentialPoet [2012-05-16 05:24:57 +0000 UTC]

Dont be sorrehhh

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Invoking [2012-05-14 01:21:24 +0000 UTC]

I don't know what you're talking about with this "horrible" bullshit. I loved it. <3 It makes very good points, especially in the last few lines.

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InconsequentialPoet In reply to Invoking [2012-05-14 01:22:49 +0000 UTC]

please don't swear around me :C i'm not very comfortable with that stuff... sorry

And thank you very much!!!! it's basically talking about anything and everything having to do with emotions... thank you so much

~ mikki

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Invoking In reply to InconsequentialPoet [2012-05-14 01:31:23 +0000 UTC]

It's the internet. You're gonna run into it. But I'll keep it clean just for you.

You're welcome.

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InconsequentialPoet In reply to Invoking [2012-05-14 01:43:01 +0000 UTC]

I know i'd just prefer if you didn't do it around me, because i know that usually, if i ask, it's over ^.^ just doing what i can.

~ Mikki

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