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Published: 2012-07-27 01:28:49 +0000 UTC; Views: 282; Favourites: 11; Downloads: 4
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Description Every moment, every thought, an echo in your mind
Every treasured lullaby you're forced to leave behind
Every broken moment, every twisted fantasy
Every empty shadow, every lonely melody
Holding knives against your skin with tears inside your eyes
Fighting back the happiness, yet fighting back the cries
How could one be joyous at a moment such as this?
Something could be stopping you, but nothing truly is…
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Comments: 14

darkprincess512 [2012-07-27 05:34:22 +0000 UTC]

I love your talent of rhyming. rhymes don't really flow with me all that well...

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InconsequentialPoet In reply to darkprincess512 [2012-07-27 17:59:01 +0000 UTC]

Aww well I'm sure your work is still fantastic

~ MIkki

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darkprincess512 In reply to InconsequentialPoet [2012-07-28 00:45:11 +0000 UTC]

Thanks but no

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InconsequentialPoet In reply to darkprincess512 [2012-07-28 01:45:41 +0000 UTC]

Hahah well I'm gonna go check!!

~ Mikki

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darkprincess512 In reply to InconsequentialPoet [2012-07-29 22:22:02 +0000 UTC]

Lol thanks

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sherlock24 [2012-07-27 01:45:50 +0000 UTC]

...Why dumb???

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InconsequentialPoet In reply to sherlock24 [2012-07-27 01:47:24 +0000 UTC]

well I think it lacks the emotion I wish it had...

~ MIkki

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sherlock24 In reply to InconsequentialPoet [2012-07-27 01:48:14 +0000 UTC]

Ohhh...but that doesn't make it dumb!

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InconsequentialPoet In reply to sherlock24 [2012-07-27 01:49:11 +0000 UTC]

Well maybe not dumb haha xD Probably the wrong word to use.. I just think it makes the poem feel emotionless almost.

~ Mikki

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sherlock24 In reply to InconsequentialPoet [2012-07-27 01:50:19 +0000 UTC]

That makes a lot more sense there.

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InconsequentialPoet In reply to sherlock24 [2012-07-27 01:50:55 +0000 UTC]

Haha alright

~ mikki

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sherlock24 In reply to InconsequentialPoet [2012-07-27 01:52:00 +0000 UTC]

...but it isn't really all that emotionless....

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InconsequentialPoet In reply to sherlock24 [2012-07-27 01:52:58 +0000 UTC]

Well I wrote it based on past experiences, and it isn't showing the strong emotions I was feeling then. I think I could have portrayed it better.

~ MIkki

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sherlock24 In reply to InconsequentialPoet [2012-07-27 01:54:03 +0000 UTC]

Well, you can challenge yourself!!!!!

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