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Published: 2012-03-13 06:22:16 +0000 UTC; Views: 188; Favourites: 7; Downloads: 9
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Description Pearl white dress now bathed in blood and roses in her hand
Entering what she thought would be her own wonderland
Walking down the aisle with a shining sapphire ring
Step by step, relying on a life of shiny things
Saying that she loves him, what a wonderful disguise
Hiding what she really wants behind those evil eyes
Making us the villains, like we've come to break her heart
Almost like we're living just to tear her world apart
Treating us like nothingness, like voices in her head
Just to make him love her so she doesn't feel so dead
Making his world spin so quickly, time does fade to grey
Waiting would have killed it, so she sent herself away
Just so she can kill him, just the way she killed us all
With the words "I love you" as she watches our lives fall…
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Comments: 21

BellaBugia [2012-04-05 02:54:28 +0000 UTC]

I get the sense that this particular person destroying everyone's lives is none other than a lying, manipulative gold digger. But that is just my take on this.

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InconsequentialPoet In reply to BellaBugia [2012-04-05 03:59:47 +0000 UTC]

I did exaggerate my opinion a little... a lot XD But ya know... I guess you've got it right, except for the gold digger part.

~ MIkki

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BellaBugia In reply to InconsequentialPoet [2012-04-06 07:21:59 +0000 UTC]

Lol! I was close enough xD It's ok. As writer's we tend to do that at times

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NicolaWingedDeity [2012-03-15 23:52:11 +0000 UTC]

Dude... ur awesome. Enough said.

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InconsequentialPoet In reply to NicolaWingedDeity [2012-03-16 01:38:10 +0000 UTC]

Ahaha, THANK YOU!

It's awesome hearing this stuff considering how young I am XD

~ Mikki

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NicolaWingedDeity In reply to InconsequentialPoet [2012-03-16 01:42:13 +0000 UTC]

o: u're the first person i hear confess their youth! hw old r u? promise u're older than me x) whoever said cuality comes with being older? You're awesome and that's that (= ^^

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InconsequentialPoet In reply to NicolaWingedDeity [2012-03-16 02:02:25 +0000 UTC]

I'm younger than thirteen, but that's all I'm saying. That's why I'm sharing this account with my mom!
If I was thirteen, I'd definitely have my own account...

~ Mikki

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NicolaWingedDeity In reply to InconsequentialPoet [2012-03-16 02:21:39 +0000 UTC]

haha! wooow! not even I am that young!! xD well you write wonderfully, so please do not stoop! =3

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InconsequentialPoet In reply to NicolaWingedDeity [2012-03-16 02:22:52 +0000 UTC]

Ahaha, thank you!!!

~ Mikki

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AnimaNinja23 [2012-03-15 23:44:25 +0000 UTC]

ok firs of all i love the way you conveyed the brilliant emotions behind this vibriant peace, and this the messedge i got pleas tell me if its anny whare near the acual messedge.

a woman is using the man and leaching off of what hes erned and his sucess and draining him untill he has nouthing, also it seems like shes useing everyone around her for her gain becoming evil and gready and ends up coning everyone out of their happyness and ending up "killing" everyone

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InconsequentialPoet In reply to AnimaNinja23 [2012-03-16 01:38:45 +0000 UTC]

Pretty accurate, yes.
And THANK YOUUU!!

~ Mikki

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AnimaNinja23 In reply to InconsequentialPoet [2012-03-16 03:16:06 +0000 UTC]

You are welcome ^^

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Axlazu [2012-03-14 17:44:29 +0000 UTC]

>Description says not to comment
>Feel like commenting anyway.

I get mixed expressions coming from this piece, all of which follow the same pattern, not sure if the person it was meant for got it though.


As always, this piece is beautifully done.

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InconsequentialPoet In reply to Axlazu [2012-03-14 17:48:48 +0000 UTC]

Ahaha, I said I don't NEED comments... but comments are still awesome. xD
What message did you get? Or.. messages? O.o

Annnnd thank you.

~ Mikki

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Axlazu In reply to InconsequentialPoet [2012-03-14 17:54:36 +0000 UTC]

Well, the first thing that comes to mind is the thought of a succubus, in a sense.
Thats the strongest feel I get from this piece, others are the obvious ones, no need to list those.

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InconsequentialPoet In reply to Axlazu [2012-03-14 17:57:11 +0000 UTC]

I had to look up that word... 'Cause I'm an idiot.. and that's weird. XD Understandable though.

And I certainly hope others are obvious. XD

~ Mikki

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Axlazu In reply to InconsequentialPoet [2012-03-14 17:58:49 +0000 UTC]

well, I mean it not in the common form, more so on the idea that the woman is using the man; like a parasite to feed off of his success, slowly rendering him to nothing but a husk of what he used to be prior to her in his life.

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InconsequentialPoet In reply to Axlazu [2012-03-14 17:59:44 +0000 UTC]

OH
Okay.

Then that's even more understandable XD

~ Mikki

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Refreshing-Refrain [2012-03-13 20:24:55 +0000 UTC]

I'm actually amazed by this. Some poetry tells you the events in the poets life and some poets get really close to getting their emotions through but this poem was exceptional at that. It was quite literally moving.

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InconsequentialPoet In reply to Refreshing-Refrain [2012-03-14 01:02:09 +0000 UTC]

Why thank ya.
This poem is actually incredibly meaningful right now, 'cause there's a bit of an event going on in my life that nobody understands the seriousness of... so yeah...
THANK YOU!

~ Mikki

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Refreshing-Refrain In reply to InconsequentialPoet [2012-03-14 19:20:38 +0000 UTC]

Well if you ever want to talk just send a bit of a note I'd be glad to talk xP

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