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indecisive-smile — First O.C. ever omg xDD
Published: 2008-09-09 16:28:56 +0000 UTC; Views: 64; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 0
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Yes.... yes.... my first O.C. ever.... aren't you amazed? xD Like... when I said I had made up a story and some characters.... if you thought "she's going to post them soon"... you couldn't be more wrong xD It took me months. Yup, I'm veryyyy lazy xD And I lack drawing skills xDSoo her name is Evelyn, I already have a story and etc for her, I'll post it soon enough xD What do you think? I want to improve almost desperately, so tell me aaaaaall that's wrong so I can make it better next time. I really meant it, I want all the critiques you can give me. Please? xD
I'm not going to write a lot like usually so that's just it.
Oh, she belongs to me xD (Is this really necessary?) And I'll probably pass this to scraps when I find out how to do such a thing xD
(and in this pic, there are a lot of things that are diferent from how she really is, bur never mind them xD and her face is weird xD (I just CAN'T make good faces. I'm a loser xD))
EDIT: I changed her face a little bit... I think it's better now, thought it still looks weird. Anyway, thanks a lot for the critiques, guys!! ^^
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Yay congrats 
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Omg, girl, just how old are you? xDD Ahh, jk, i'm just sort of laaaate in the oc world xDD now I have four, yay xDD
The descriptions might take a little... classes kill me.. -.-' and I'm lazy
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Classes kill me too xDDD Well the description will come out naturally
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I suppose... they kill everyone... xDD I'm hoping so
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A expressão está adorável^^
Sorry, eu odeio criticar o trabalho dos outros, mesmo com crítica construtiva^^
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Obrigada ^^
Não tem mal, não tem mal, I'm happy anyway
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Não sabes sequer passar as coisas para os Scraps e depois aindas por aí a dizer q és uma das pessoas mais sábias do DA x'DDD
Ai ai!
É só seleccionares "No Category" na categoria xD
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Ah, shut up xD Eu SOU das pessoas mais sábias do dA, só que não sabia isso ^.^
Pronto, estás a ver, é super dificil, daí que eu não soubesse
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Super dificil não haja duvida xDD
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Please, don't look at the top first it's all wrong!!!
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The expression is good!! There a few things wrong for one you didn't draw the back of the skull this reference from the artist andrew loomis should help with that, it helped me allot!! [link]
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And she looks off balance, like as if she is going to fall backwards. the way to fix this is to practice gesture, for example heres another page from andrew loomis's book, [link]
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and don't flustered, gesture is something hard to learn and can take time to master, but fundamental for an artist to learn.I recommend drawing from life it will help when learn what goes where and what does what. I really hope this helps you!!
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Aww thanks so much!!!
Again, thank you soooo much!!!
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Your very welcome!! I will be glad to help you at any time!!!!!
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The expression is good!! There a few things wrong for one you didn't draw the back of the skull this reference from the artist andrew loomis should help with that, it helped me allot!!1 [link] w=12,[link] And she looks off balance, like as if she is going to fall backwards. the way to fix this is to practice gesture, for example heres another page from andrew loomis's book,[link] and don't flustered, gesture is something hard to learn and can take time to master, but fundamental for an artist to learn.I recommend drawing from life it will help when learn what goes where and what does what. I really hope this helps you!!
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let's see:
-a cara está muito comprida, devias faze-la mais pequena
-o braço que tá À nossa esquerda (o braço direito dela) está demasiado largo (na zona digamos "do ombro")
but I like the outfit and the hair ^^
and you don't lack drawing skills!
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Aww obrigada I so love when people do critiques like this
Já refis um pouco a cara, acho que agora está melhor, embora continue esquisita xDD
Quando ao braço, eu tentei modificar, juro que sim, mas aquilo sai-me ainda pior xDDD
I do lack them, thought xDD
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welcome
lool qero ver isso!
You don't
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Já fiz edit, mas i bet que nem notas a diferença xDD
I do
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nota-se uma beca...mas acho q a cara dela tá um bocado estranha (na vida real diria-se q tem a cara gorda x'D) mas n sei pq @.@
e continuo a dizer o mesmo do braço x'D
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I knoooow parece que tem 5 anos e tem cara bolachuda ou assim xDDD
E o braço nao consigo mesmo fazer melhor xDDD
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looool tenta e trabalha mas é!
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Mas eu sou lazyyy 8D
Este deixo assim mas para a próxima faço melhor xD
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i love the outfit design! and her hair is cute.
her ear is a bit small, and her chin looks to wide and too big. nothing i can see other than that, well done ^_^
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Thanks a lot ^^ I changed a bit the face and I think it looks better now. Your critique helped me a lot 
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it does look better ^_^ glad i could help
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Thanks ^^ You were a great help
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