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Published: 2008-07-02 17:01:05 +0000 UTC; Views: 4625; Favourites: 65; Downloads: 0
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I would really appreciate crits or comments on this because although I like this I think there might be something a bit off about this?
The ref is of Adriana Lima.
Thank you to for the name.
Edit: I have changed the face and neck a bit ... I hope it looks better
I didn't change the size of the neck because a) I quite like it and b) it would be very hard to changePlease comment on the changes and let me know what you think.
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You should definitely do more coloured pics.
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the neck seems a bit too long, no? otherwise it looks great.
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you welcome. You are really improving these. One of your works made me wonder if it was a real black and white photograph
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it looks almost like a copy of oryginal picture. in fact there's something a bit wrong with face but still amazing
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neck is too long, and it looks like she doesn't have a chin (chin is very small). everything else looks good, i would just say focus on the neck and lower part of the head
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Thank you
I was thinking about it and i think
I'm gonna leave the neck because if you think about it the neck finishes at about where the shadow starts under the chin ... but i dunno.
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can you link me to the original? man, i'm telling you, since i've been watching you, which has been a few months now, you have gotten WAY better. the detail, the clarity, proportions for the most part have gotten better. just keep on keeping on and i think you will be one of the best out there. i have a pretty damn good eye for detail, i just haven't figured out the whole "tablet w/ photoshop" thing. it's alot harder than i thought. maybe i just don't have it set up right...everything looks good, i just thing there is something about the neck and chin that looks a little off. being an artist, you know as well as i do that the littlest correction can change the whole picture. happy 4th man!!!
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Here is a link to the reference [link]
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oh, well then i guess you nailed it. that's a weird ass angle they shot her at. makes her look like an alien
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its a bit blurry... but overall good. could u post the reference pic?
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Thank you
here is a link to the ref [link]
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its excellent.. but the composition is a bit off..
the neck is way too long, looks like she is pulling her own head of her shoulders
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Thank you
I'll be working on it again later on so come back and tell me what you think when its updated
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oohhh. just saw the reference pica...
what's going on with the neck... seems fotoshopped in the reference...
no body has a that long of a neck...
except maybe those wierd tribes in africa with all those rings around their necks to strectch it on purpose
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just realized that photo manipulation happens more often than not with these sort of glossy pictures
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I thought this was a photo again 
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Thank you
I'll work on it a bit more
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I think its amazing! The body and that lovely painted effect is really, really effective.
Id just say define her left hand side of the face, make it a little bit more sharper and define the jaw line.
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I think it is really good, stood out the most when I was browsing by a long shot!
If you want me to nit-pick, her face looks a bit greasy - but hey, maybe it is! And her neck looks kinda long.
Great anatomical detail. And her garments looks spot on.
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I still think it's the face... like, the bottom half... lips, chin, cheek... Am I totally off?
But everything else looks great
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I'll keep working on it
Thank you
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Great to see another colored piece from you!!! ^^
First the good things: I LOVE the way you did the body - very smooth and very realistic!!! Especially the bra, the breasts and the belly!
The only problem I see is her face - the perspective seems a bit off!!! It's a very hard perspective! But if you work on it a bit more I bet you can do it!
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Thank you
I'll keep working on the head tomorrow
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The lips, and maybe the cheek by the left (her right) eye...but the coloring is fantastic!!!
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Thank you
I'll work on the lips and the eye.
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wow it's great (: i like it! hehe hot...
but the shape of the lips is a bit strange..
(i would like to own this bra too 
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Thank you
I'll work on that.
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