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OKAY. WOWZ. Yeah, this first part is corny and over dramatic. Don't take it seriously, plz, or it'll be even worse
Title is Innocent Sorrow, there's not enough room in the Dev Title though
I've never made a comic before.. I think this setup is okay?... but I'm not very happy with the style. It's time consuming and.. well I'm just not satisfied with how it looks
From now on, the "coloring" is going to be a little simpler. I'll skip around styles a every once and a while, to see which one I like best. (hopefully it's not too distracting 8D)So, erm yeah! What's something I could work on?? Style wise? Setup wise? Comic, etc.. anything! I'm such a n00b with this @_@!!
Stuff c) me
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MORE PLZ~
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I thinks, its really good so far. I really love the wolf a lot and panels are really good too. I think you should add maybe more sound effects in your later pages. Other than that, I think its really great story ^o^
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Thank you so much!!
oh yeah sound effects! XDD I completely forgot about those DX
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I love this!!! I love your style so much, however, if you think it should be simpler, than that's fine with me (((:
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You're welcome 
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I think so far the overall style, setup and composition are just perfect, really artistic and not distracting at all: It all fits perfectly with the dramatic atmosphere. It is a somewhat uncommon style for a comic, but who wants to be another brick in the wall? It does look pretty time-consuming, though.
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Wow thank you so much!! 
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EVERYTHING
IS
JUST
TOO
DAMN
AWESOME
GIMME SOME MORE NAOOOOOOOO!!! *stares at the awesome composition, great coloring and incredibly fluid storytelling abilities*
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;o; ;o; ff THANK YOU SO MUCH LEA!!
Ps: I love this icon
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fasgdfksa no prob and sorry for uber late reply
and OMGOMGOMGOMG ILU SO MUCH INDI FFFFFFFFFFFFF
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O.O i REALLY need to catch up with my story now TT.TT
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OH! I KNOW!!
maybe try using sound effects? Like in manga comics XD like when the ice shatters you can have KRSH or CRASH or something in epic letters near it XD
it really helps with imagining the emotion better at times, i think :3
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ooooh. I KNEW I was forgetting something!! XD I'll definitely do that !! XD
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OMFG!!!!!! i luffles you, it's so awesome i absolutely love how you use the textures!!! uwaaah im so excited for this! 
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*epic jizz*
*reads again*
WORDS CANNOT DESCRIBE THE SHEER AWESOMENESS AND INSAMENESS AND... AND AND DRAMATICNESS OF THIS!!!!!
dghsaj sorry if i kill you with a long comment XD im just envying you SO HARD right now!
OK um, stuff to improve on... right now i cant think of any! XD maybe later on ill see something, but right now its awesome!!
i LOVE how you did the 'speech bubbles' instead of the usual circle thing X3 and i LOVE LOVE LOVE the dramaticness!!
fff ok ill shuttup now XD
*goes to improve my shattered sorrow manga chapter* |D
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*epic jizz* LMAO
f-f-f-f-!! THANK YOU SO MUCH ;O; *is awed*
ROFL THANKS!! These are the only speech bubbles like it tho, hahah 8D but now that you say that, I think I'll do it every once and a while
Wow thanks so much again ;o;!! I feel motivated!
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- I absolutely adore your comic so far. The saturated colors go so well with this. I can't wait to see more <3.
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So far so good actually. I can never get past the first page whenever I start a comic. My stories are never well planned and it just goes nowhere. OTL
Anywoo~ Very well done on coloring, setup is fine but a little confusing on what's happening. Probably need to slow down a bit.
The only major thing bothering me is the dialog. There's too many ellipses and the word 'stupid' is repetitive.
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rofl, same XD This is the first time I've gotten passed page 2. I feel accomplished >8D Huzzah
Hmm yeah that's a good idea XD I think this did speed by too fast.
Thanks!!
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Wow, these were really well done. The style works great, and gives a very dramatic feel to it. I like the overall color of it as well. These are great!
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