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KuroLove [2010-04-19 02:21:44 +0000 UTC]

Amazing, amazing. More!
Every panel is so detailed and there's so much texture. @w@
Keep it up!

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taytaybee [2010-03-30 02:41:49 +0000 UTC]

*read summarry*
waaaiiitttt... is that Indi or Sin??

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Wuhzzles [2010-03-28 13:19:54 +0000 UTC]

Oh my god, this is so cool!
I am glad you decided to do the comic idea, you have the most amazing stories and it would be awesome so that everyone can read them 8D
Anyways, I might not comment on all the pages, but just so you know, I AM READING EVERY SINGLE ONE OF THEM!

Amazing job so far, and good luck on the rest of the comic!

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Akasuki-Mamaro [2010-03-28 08:49:08 +0000 UTC]

oh my goodness I'd write a more coherent comment but it's 4 am and I'm so flipping tired :'D But FFFFFFFFF. So much tallleeeeennnntttttt. ttttt. t. The set up and the art are a LOT better than I've seen in other webcomics, and the in media res-nes of it is something I love personally Feel free to simplify it according to how you want to draw it, but goodness gracious, it's already amazing XD

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Dreesha [2010-03-28 02:12:56 +0000 UTC]

oh wow looks amazin' really cute style, great bgs, charas, effects great start it looks really interesting
well done

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Neverboy [2010-03-27 19:07:55 +0000 UTC]

omg this is amazing!! really awesome to be your first time! i like it to much, panels, composition, tones, expressions.. all great! >y👍: 0 ⏩: 1

Isho13 [2010-03-27 10:53:03 +0000 UTC]

I'm so jealous. You make the pages a lot faster than me and yours look far better than mine!

I love the textures and the dark feeling of the pages

Good work, I knew you were going to do well.

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Sorain26 [2010-03-27 07:17:30 +0000 UTC]

This looks great, the story sounds interesting and the shading is awesome.

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kuchinawa [2010-03-27 03:08:38 +0000 UTC]

I love the colour scheme and style!! It's very unique, and I wouldn't say you're doing anything "wrong." It's really cool so far, looking forward to reading more.

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indigo-moogle [2010-03-27 01:32:56 +0000 UTC]

Really good! As always, I love the flagrant texture abuse. The only thing that confusing me so far is that she seems to facing off against a wolf/creature, and then she's in front of those doors, and I'm not really sure how the two connect. But great work; I love the emotion on her face here.

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Ameryln [2010-03-26 23:29:15 +0000 UTC]

I like the style of writing, the only things I'll say are that max !'s are one, to make the writing seem more clean, and possibly the introductions of the actual story are a bit abrupt, because you have all the information on one page, try expanding it and let the readers absorb all the nutrients of the story.

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Dykah [2010-03-26 20:59:28 +0000 UTC]

CARLY, YOU ARE EPIC.
i love the coloring and the overlay of this is quite fantastic.
IM SO JEALOUS OF YOUR PHOTOSHOP ABILITIES :'D

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WhiteKimahri [2010-03-26 19:44:50 +0000 UTC]

Wow, already done four tables with such short notice? I'm impressed!
And you've made a gorgeous work so far! A wonderful style we have here, so fresh and captivating. I personally like the predominant blue-greyish shade of the entire work.

Really good!

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Nahamut [2010-03-26 19:11:20 +0000 UTC]

woooow I really loved your comic so far *__* You are good with it and too bad that consumes lots of time to do the comic this style, I found it so pretty and the feeling can be show so well with those textures/dark shades~

I'll make sure to look foward to next ones, you are doing very well, Indi! Keep it up ^^ I love the dramatic feeling btw hehe! Great work ; D

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cronft [2010-03-26 18:51:01 +0000 UTC]

wow, this is great, i whant see more ò_ó

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kijeyin [2010-03-26 15:36:43 +0000 UTC]

i think it's gorgeous and really well-planned the lighting, coloring, shadows and textures, even the speech bubbles! i think this has started out at the very best! but when the story gets beyond the prologue, what color scheme are you going to use? less sober colors or traditional grayscale? will the shadows be black-white or "gradient" realistic shadows? will the text go left-right or right-left xD i have no idea; you probably have planned the answers to these questions already, but i can't wait to see the rest!

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kinixuki [2010-03-26 14:00:55 +0000 UTC]

I love the textures and dramatic atmosphere Maybe you should use sounds and some speech bubbles should be bigger...but everything else looks fine

You have broken link on page 2...

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Dark-Dee [2010-03-26 11:58:50 +0000 UTC]

ooh,, i can't wait to see more,, love the texture effect

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Kieke-boe [2010-03-26 11:23:00 +0000 UTC]

More! More!
I love the gritty texture you used. It gives it a great atmostphere ^_^
Oh! And fantastic eyes in the last frame btw. They literally made me go WHOA...


*coughcoughthenextandpreviouslinksdon'tworkonpage3cough*

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marbels [2010-03-26 09:27:34 +0000 UTC]

First of all: Wow, I didn't know you'd upload 4 (!) pages on such short notice, very admirable! 8D
Second: I adore it! You used a style I'm not quite used form you, but darn, it suits so well with the story! (and it's not that corny or over-dramatic for a comic )
The fact you used only blue/greyish colors is awesome too, but I can't wait to see what different styles you'll be using in the future.
I must say it looks like you've been making these kind of comic/story/whatever you prefer calling it.

I really, really like it, and I'll be looking forward to the next set of pages

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KonyKonKon [2010-03-26 07:47:53 +0000 UTC]

Well this has certainly grabbed my attention. =] The style fits with the mood well. Though at the beginning I wasn't sure if the text was narration, thought or speech.

Other than that, I think this is pretty good and I would love to see some more.

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