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traditional sketch art:Digital line art and refining:
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thanks we all work really hard on it
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A really nice job you're doin' on this manga story and lovely colors, especially for the skin! Keep going on!
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thanks im glad you enjoy it!
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I think it is good, the only thing I recommend is that you use other words for when people fall or sign or something like that. You use words like gah, hng and kchak, I would use words that are also used in other comics. I think you really use the different perspectives well and the way you introduce the story. The drawings are also very good and anatomically correct (I think that is very important) One last tip: more variation with colors. I hope this will help you (:
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thanks again for tips dude. these will help us make our manga even better
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why thank you kind madam
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Your welcome, I think all of your work is amazing:3
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oh well it isn all just me, there are several other deviants that work with me on it. they are all linked at the bottem of each page. please go check them out
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Well then you make a great team;D
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thanks dude glad you like it
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I've been trying to follow this one! I love the art and I'm trying to catch the story.
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well we are still only just starting at the moment so there isn't very much of a story yet but I promise you we have a lot in store for you guys!
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Awesome! 
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(fangirl mode: rape him...heheXD)
hmm~ i wonder what's next=w=~
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NO! there will be no yaoi here! shame on you, get your mind out of the gutter ya sickko. this is a kids show...
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hehe~ sorry sorryXD
its a habit of mine for these sort of shippings~
anyways, cant wait for the next page to come out....Is he gonna shoot or what!? OAO!
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one shall have to wait and see madam
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Looks interesting. I'll have to check the other pages.
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glad you think so
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awwwww hes gonna die someone help him hes gonna die someone!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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LOLOLOL~~the first time i wanna be a spoiler so badly HAHAHA~!!
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HAHA! I knew he wasanΒ΄t going to die heros never die if they die itΒ΄s in the end of the story
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LOLOL~~~~yes thats it~~!
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oh no... don't die! Someone help him!..
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This manga is freaking epic!!! 
I look forward to the next page~
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I have read all of the other pages... it's really good! Love the comic
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holy crap dude i can tell! you faved all the other pages. but hey im glad you enjoy it
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Also, yes, when I like a comic on DA, I usually fave the pages XDDD
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i feel so sorry for this charcter D:
awesome job once more i am loving this comic ^^
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hey thanks! we all try our hardest! stick around though, the story has only yet to begin
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